There may be a word missing here: "overseeing execution of MacArthur's major operations, including the New Guinea, Philippines and Borneo campaigns." Might this be "overseeing the execution of MacArthur's major operations, including the New Guinea, Philippines and Borneo campaigns"? Done
"Stephen Jones Chamberlin was a Lieutenant General in the United States Army", this should be "Stephen Jones Chamberlin was a lieutenant general in the United States Army." Done
"Chamberlin was commissioned a Second Lieutenant in...", should be "Chamberlin was commissioned a second lieutenant in..." Done
"He was promoted to First Lieutenant on 1 July 1916...", which should be "He was promoted to first lieutenant on 1 July 1916..." Done
"married General Shank's daughter, Sarah Chapman", this should just be "married Shank's daughter, Sarah Chapman" removing rank after formal introduction per
WP:SURNAME. Done
Is the capitalisation correct here: "assistant chief of the Construction Branch"? Specifically should it be "Assistant Chief of the Construction Branch"? Please check this.
Possible missing word here, as per my above comments: "Chamberlin was responsible for planning and overseeing execution of MacArthur's major operations, including the New Guinea, Philippines and Borneo campaigns." Specifically should this be "and overseeing the execution"? Done
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
Yes, this seems fine to me.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
No issues here.
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The image used appears to be PD and seems appropriate for the article.
There may be a word missing here: "overseeing execution of MacArthur's major operations, including the New Guinea, Philippines and Borneo campaigns." Might this be "overseeing the execution of MacArthur's major operations, including the New Guinea, Philippines and Borneo campaigns"? Done
"Stephen Jones Chamberlin was a Lieutenant General in the United States Army", this should be "Stephen Jones Chamberlin was a lieutenant general in the United States Army." Done
"Chamberlin was commissioned a Second Lieutenant in...", should be "Chamberlin was commissioned a second lieutenant in..." Done
"He was promoted to First Lieutenant on 1 July 1916...", which should be "He was promoted to first lieutenant on 1 July 1916..." Done
"married General Shank's daughter, Sarah Chapman", this should just be "married Shank's daughter, Sarah Chapman" removing rank after formal introduction per
WP:SURNAME. Done
Is the capitalisation correct here: "assistant chief of the Construction Branch"? Specifically should it be "Assistant Chief of the Construction Branch"? Please check this.
Possible missing word here, as per my above comments: "Chamberlin was responsible for planning and overseeing execution of MacArthur's major operations, including the New Guinea, Philippines and Borneo campaigns." Specifically should this be "and overseeing the execution"? Done
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
Yes, this seems fine to me.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
No issues here.
It contains
images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have
fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain':
The image used appears to be PD and seems appropriate for the article.