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Overall, this article looks good. However, I have a few concerns.
- Just a comment, not a fan of the current picture. It looks like she's doing a Budweiser commercial. "Wassssssuuuupppp!"
- Is that all you can find for her early life? It seems a little short and stubby. I seem to remember that she did modeling for their magazine, modeling shirts and such, when she was younger.
- Wikify "low blow", incase readers come to the page wondering what exactly a low blow is.
- "McMahon later became Angle's manager and was in his corner when he defeated The Rock for the WWF Championship at No Mercy.[22] The alliance was short lived, as The Rock performed his Rock Bottom maneuver on Stephanie at No Mercy.[23]" The second sentence makes it sound like she was in the Rock's corner. Maybe you could clarify/elaborate on why Angle and McMahon split up?
- "On the March 25 episode of Raw, Jericho and McMahon lost to Triple H in a Triple Threat match for the Undisputed Championship, with the stipulation that, if McMahon was pinned, she would be forced to leave the WWF.[35]" So, who was pinned?
- "In October 2005, she was involved in the firing of Raw announcer Jim Ross.[44]" How exactly was she involved? What did she do?
- Some of the Backstage roles could use some wikifying. :)
- The last paragraph of "Personal life" could be placed into another paragraph, it's a littly stubby by itself.
Until my concerns have been addressed, I will place this article on hold. Please leave a message on my talkpage when you have addressed my concerns, or if you have any questions. Good work so far! CarpetCrawler message me 17:09, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
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message me 06:42, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
Overall, this article looks good. However, I have a few concerns.
- Just a comment, not a fan of the current picture. It looks like she's doing a Budweiser commercial. "Wassssssuuuupppp!"
- Is that all you can find for her early life? It seems a little short and stubby. I seem to remember that she did modeling for their magazine, modeling shirts and such, when she was younger.
- Wikify "low blow", incase readers come to the page wondering what exactly a low blow is.
- "McMahon later became Angle's manager and was in his corner when he defeated The Rock for the WWF Championship at No Mercy.[22] The alliance was short lived, as The Rock performed his Rock Bottom maneuver on Stephanie at No Mercy.[23]" The second sentence makes it sound like she was in the Rock's corner. Maybe you could clarify/elaborate on why Angle and McMahon split up?
- "On the March 25 episode of Raw, Jericho and McMahon lost to Triple H in a Triple Threat match for the Undisputed Championship, with the stipulation that, if McMahon was pinned, she would be forced to leave the WWF.[35]" So, who was pinned?
- "In October 2005, she was involved in the firing of Raw announcer Jim Ross.[44]" How exactly was she involved? What did she do?
- Some of the Backstage roles could use some wikifying. :)
- The last paragraph of "Personal life" could be placed into another paragraph, it's a littly stubby by itself.
Until my concerns have been addressed, I will place this article on hold. Please leave a message on my talkpage when you have addressed my concerns, or if you have any questions. Good work so far! CarpetCrawler message me 17:09, 29 April 2009 (UTC)