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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 05:04, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
- I will have a look at this.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
- WP:LEAD clearly does not summarize the rest of the article. Each section of the article should be summarized.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:49, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- Infobox highlights should each have a separate line.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:12, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- The article is missing an early life section. Surely, he was a standout high school athlete. We need a paragraph saying who his parents are and where he is from. I would expect at least a brief description of his high school athletic career. The name of his high school is sort of required for this to be a GA quality bio. If you can find any stories about his recruitment, they should be added here.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:53, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- IMO, links like [[Wake Forest Demon Deacons football|Wake Forest]] should really attempt to point to 1983 Wake Forest Demon Deacons football team. Use {{ cfb link}} if necessary.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:01, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- " Boomer Esiason in 1983 and Frank Reich in the 1984 season" would be less of an WP:EASTEREGG if it were something like " Boomer Esiason on the 1983 Terrapins and Frank Reich on the 1984 Terrapins"-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:15, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- His wife is prominently mentioned in IC [2]. Her name should be in the article.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Mention any kids that they may have as well.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Does "Sam Wyche told him he thought Stan was good enough to play in the NFL" really support "Sam Wyche thought he was good enough to be a starter"?-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Can you provide the names of any of the "Nasty Boyz"?-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- I don't think I need to read this any further. There are way too may deficiencies. It fails WP:WIAGA.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:09, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 05:04, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
- I will have a look at this.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
- WP:LEAD clearly does not summarize the rest of the article. Each section of the article should be summarized.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:49, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- Infobox highlights should each have a separate line.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:12, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- The article is missing an early life section. Surely, he was a standout high school athlete. We need a paragraph saying who his parents are and where he is from. I would expect at least a brief description of his high school athletic career. The name of his high school is sort of required for this to be a GA quality bio. If you can find any stories about his recruitment, they should be added here.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:53, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- IMO, links like [[Wake Forest Demon Deacons football|Wake Forest]] should really attempt to point to 1983 Wake Forest Demon Deacons football team. Use {{ cfb link}} if necessary.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:01, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- " Boomer Esiason in 1983 and Frank Reich in the 1984 season" would be less of an WP:EASTEREGG if it were something like " Boomer Esiason on the 1983 Terrapins and Frank Reich on the 1984 Terrapins"-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:15, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- His wife is prominently mentioned in IC [2]. Her name should be in the article.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Mention any kids that they may have as well.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Does "Sam Wyche told him he thought Stan was good enough to play in the NFL" really support "Sam Wyche thought he was good enough to be a starter"?-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Can you provide the names of any of the "Nasty Boyz"?-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- I don't think I need to read this any further. There are way too may deficiencies. It fails WP:WIAGA.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:09, 25 July 2014 (UTC)