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Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.[1]
Please provide an independent reference for the statement.
Mitch Ames (
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Hi
AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestion. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, I agree with
Mitch Ames that you must provide an
independent source. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using
vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better. Best,
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St John of God Geraldton Hospital is within the scope of WikiProject Australia, which aims to improve Wikipedia's coverage of
Australia and
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Hospitals, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.[1]
Please provide an independent reference for the statement.
Mitch Ames (
talk) 11:59, 5 June 2020 (UTC)reply
Hi
AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestion. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, I agree with
Mitch Ames that you must provide an
independent source. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using
vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better. Best,
Altamel (
talk) 19:12, 5 June 2020 (UTC)reply
Talk page watchers, please see a relevant discussion at
WP:COIN.
Altamel (
talk) 19:14, 5 June 2020 (UTC)reply