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Sturmvogel 66 (
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Is it reasonably well written ?
A. Prose quality:
B.
MoS compliance for
lead ,
layout ,
words to watch ,
fiction , and
lists :
The McAlister reference needs its capitalization fixed and a place of publication provided. Where was Sorrells published?
Fixed.--
William S. Saturn (
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Is it factually accurate and
verifiable ?
A. References to sources:
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
C.
No original research :
Is it broad in its coverage ?
A. Major aspects:
The sentence about the Karankawa Indians defending the settlers is out of sequence chronologically.
Removed. Not essential to the bay.--
William S. Saturn (
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B. Focused:
The Union bombardment did more than just stall Lamar's development. Describe what actually happened. Don't think that the Reserve at St. Charles Bay is notable.
Added more detail.--
William S. Saturn (
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Is it
neutral ?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable ?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain
images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales :
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions :
Needs a map, badly. In fact a map is essential.
Will add a map shortly.--
William S. Saturn (
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Map added.--
William S. Saturn (
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Overall :
Pass or Fail:
Thank you for the review on such short notice.--
William S. Saturn (
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