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Nominator: Pokelego999 ( talk · contribs) 13:48, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Reconrabbit ( talk · contribs) 20:27, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I'm taking on this review. It's a pretty short article, but there's only so much that can be written about Squirtle in this venue.
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Squirtle has received a mostly positive reception since its debut, with a group of specific Squirtle, known as the Squirtle Squad, developing a strong popularity as a result of their appearance in the Pokémon anime.
Then-President Elect of Chile, Gabriel Boric Font, received a Squirtle plush as a gift from Japan after he stated he was a fan of the series."Then-President Elect" doesn't make sense without specifying when this event happened. Maybe reword it so that his occupation is later, e.g., "Gabriel Boric Font received a Squirtle plush ... just prior to his inauguration as President of Chile."
they had a powerful backstory and strong popularity among fansWhile representative of the source, this is an awkward way to state that the Squirtle Squad was well-liked. The Gamer is pretty borderline here and I don't really see how much this almost-opinion piece contributes considering we already have GamesRadar and Vice sources in the same paragraph.
I'm working on this as I go. Should give another update in a few hours. Recon rabbit 20:27, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Pokelego999 ( talk · contribs) 13:48, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Reconrabbit ( talk · contribs) 20:27, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I'm taking on this review. It's a pretty short article, but there's only so much that can be written about Squirtle in this venue.
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rabbit
Squirtle has received a mostly positive reception since its debut, with a group of specific Squirtle, known as the Squirtle Squad, developing a strong popularity as a result of their appearance in the Pokémon anime.
Then-President Elect of Chile, Gabriel Boric Font, received a Squirtle plush as a gift from Japan after he stated he was a fan of the series."Then-President Elect" doesn't make sense without specifying when this event happened. Maybe reword it so that his occupation is later, e.g., "Gabriel Boric Font received a Squirtle plush ... just prior to his inauguration as President of Chile."
they had a powerful backstory and strong popularity among fansWhile representative of the source, this is an awkward way to state that the Squirtle Squad was well-liked. The Gamer is pretty borderline here and I don't really see how much this almost-opinion piece contributes considering we already have GamesRadar and Vice sources in the same paragraph.
I'm working on this as I go. Should give another update in a few hours. Recon rabbit 20:27, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
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