... in his work A General Synopsis of Birds from 1783 I have not seen "from" anywhere, I have rather seen "in" there. I don't know if I am wrong, but I think the best way would be ...his 1783 work...
Some writers speculated that the specimens could ... but there is no evidence to support this Much vagueness here. Try to give at least one valid example of such a writer or cite one of such works in which such speculation is clear. As you have done in the second paragraph.
The source itself is vague on this: "Later authors, however, based on the relationship between Davies, Banks and Cook, made the assumption that the birds came from the South Pacific, although there is no evidence in the literature that a bird even faintly resembling a Spotted Green Pigeon was received by Banks after Cook’s third voyage (Medway 1979, Stresemann 1949, 1950, 1953)." I don't know what the citations at the end refer to, who made the claim, or who claimed there was no evidence... As this is the most comprehensive source about the bird, it doesn't seem to be important then.
FunkMonk (
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06:01, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Generally the authors stated at the end of a sentence like "Some authors hold that..." are the ones the text is referring to. BTW for your convenience I found the online Medway 1979 work
here and Stresemann's 1950 work
here. I think even citing these in the article should be enough.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words07:49, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Ah, thanks for the articles, they confirm my fear... They are articles about what birds Cook did collect, none mention the spotted pigeon, so they only support this part: "there is no evidence in the literature that a bird even faintly resembling a Spotted Green Pigeon was received by Banks after Cook’s third voyage". This means those that made the connection between Cook and the bird are not cited nor named... So not much I can add.
FunkMonk (
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01:19, 1 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I think a solution would be to use the original source that told you about "those writers" in the first half of the sentence, and the second half could be sourced using these two articles.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words08:43, 2 February 2016 (UTC)reply
You mean keeping the sentence as it is? I don't think I can let those sources stand alone, since they don't mention the subject of this article they have to be used in conjunction with the article that makes them, otherwise it might seem like original synthesis... But I can definitely add them.
FunkMonk (
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16:30, 2 February 2016 (UTC)reply
Well, I say, if the speculation thing has no evidence or much significance, then why add such a troublesome line? Remove it and be done with it if unless it would be too big a loss which I don't think it will be. Even if we agree on a compromise here, I feel it will surely stir up trouble at FAC!
Sainsf<^>Talk all words02:29, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
How about "Though Banks received many specimens from British explorer James Cook, and Davis received specimens from contacts in
New South Wales, implying a location in the South Pacific Ocean, there are no records of spotted green pigeons having been sent from these sources."
FunkMonk (
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05:40, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
Davies' specimen was originally mounted, and was perhaps taxidermied by himself. I could not understand what you meant by "mounted". Also, what exactly are you "perhaps" about? Are you unsure if it was taxidermied or if it was he or someone else who did it? I think this needs a rejig.
Why should Gmelin be considered the authority for the present name if he was associated only with Columba maculata?
Because the original species name is the "important" name that will remain constant in whatever genus the animal is classified in... This is the standard in taxonomy.
FunkMonk (
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06:01, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Rewrote it, it seems it might even have been an overstatement, it seems like the bird was barely mentioned at all, with a single publication (not known if the only one) considering it valid.
FunkMonk (
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01:19, 1 February 2016 (UTC)reply
In 2001 Errol Fuller suggested that the bird had been historically overlooked because Rothschild (who had an obsessive interest in rare birds) dismissed it as an aberration, perhaps due to not owning the specimen himself, and therefore downplaying its significance. This description of Rothschild could be rejigged, it looks inappropriate as it is.
He also hypothesised the bird might have inhabited a Pacific island In the lead you specified it as "South" Pacific Ocean.
The mention in the lead is due to the sentence "Some writers speculated that the specimens could have been brought from the
South Pacific Ocean".
FunkMonk (
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Who is Heupink? If not known you may simply write "2014 study of ancient DNA".
Added occupation. I don't think naming people is necessarily a problem as long as their occupation is noted. Especially not when it comes to seminal studies like this. Hasn't been a problem before, in any case.
FunkMonk (
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06:38, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
...yet the genetic distance between the two was more than what is seen within other pigeon species, but similar to that between different species in the same genus I could not understand the part after the comma. Are you referring in general to a genus and its species or are you talking of Caloenas and its species?
Clarified, better? As for the addition to your comment, it is both about the distance generally seen, and the distance in Caloenas.
FunkMonk (
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07:31, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
...suggests dispersal through island hopping and an origin for the spotted green pigeon in Oceania or Southeast Asia Should it not be "southeastern" Asia? I guess that is more proper unless you refer to some country like South Africa or North Korea. Same for South Asia in the last line of the section.
...indicates that the spotted green pigeon could also have originated somewhere in the Indian Ocean You don't mention the possibility of the bird's former occurrence anywhere near Indian Ocean in the lead.
In any case, it seems most likely that the bird inhabited an island location, like its relatives You may be asked to specify which relatives you refer to.
I think citation 4 should be placed at the end of the line Latham's slightly extended ... reads as follows: rather than inside the quote.
From what I've seen, the opposite is actually used in most FAs with quotes. In any case, hasn't been a problem for me in other articles.
FunkMonk (
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06:25, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
... may already have been close to extinction by the time Europeans arrived in its native area Wait, you have not stated the range explicitly, then which area do you refer to? It could be the Pacific or the Indian Ocean, and we do not even know where exactly. Forget about the "when".
That's why I don't specify. Wherever it lived, it was native to somewhere, but we don't know where it is... But the information about European arrival would be the same.
FunkMonk (
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06:04, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
OK, I see why this can not be specified. But if you are so sure of the European arrival, then you could add this to the lead and Taxonomy sections so that when one first comes across it they will know that this bird was native to some area in the Pacific where the European arrival is confirmed.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words07:26, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
What do you want added? We know Europeans encountered the birds in their native area because specimens were brought to Europe, not because there are accounts of their discovery in the wild. So it kind of goes without saying (and no source states it explicitly).
FunkMonk (
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01:19, 1 February 2016 (UTC)reply
General : It would be better if you rearranged stuff and made it look like it has enough inline citations instead of "spreading over" citations for each paragraph by mentioning them at the end of each paragraph. Also, you must modify the lead as you modify the article.
Hmm, this is an optionable style issue, there's no rule as to which is better. Never had problems with this style. If everything in a paragraph is from the same source, only once citation is needed by the end.
FunkMonk (
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06:14, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Nice! Already have two FACs up, so have to wait until one of them passes... I'm surprised how little response the passenger pigeon has gotten, perhaps the article is intimidating...
FunkMonk (
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06:44, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
You can only have one FAC up as sole nominator, but one more if it is a co-nomination... "An editor is allowed to be the sole nominator of only one article at a time; however, two nominations may be allowed if the editor is a co-nominator on at least one of them." But GANs are limitless.
FunkMonk (
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12:57, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
A little bonus info I forgot to mention,
Sainsf, while researching for this article, I found the alternate version of the 1823 plate seen under description... I was puzzled because it differed so much from the version mentioned in the sources, so I asked Hein van Grouw (who wrote the latest detailed paper about the bird) about it in an email, and he said he had never seen it before... The weird thing is, it looks more like the existing skin than the other version of the drawing... So as it seems to have been overlooked, it is kind of "new" to science!
FunkMonk (
talk)
04:38, 6 February 2016 (UTC)reply
These two depictions of extinct birds
[1][2] I identified were also previously unknown in the literature according to
Julian P. Hume! So researching for Wikipedia can have benefits outside of improving articles...
FunkMonk (
talk)
04:54, 6 February 2016 (UTC)reply
... in his work A General Synopsis of Birds from 1783 I have not seen "from" anywhere, I have rather seen "in" there. I don't know if I am wrong, but I think the best way would be ...his 1783 work...
Some writers speculated that the specimens could ... but there is no evidence to support this Much vagueness here. Try to give at least one valid example of such a writer or cite one of such works in which such speculation is clear. As you have done in the second paragraph.
The source itself is vague on this: "Later authors, however, based on the relationship between Davies, Banks and Cook, made the assumption that the birds came from the South Pacific, although there is no evidence in the literature that a bird even faintly resembling a Spotted Green Pigeon was received by Banks after Cook’s third voyage (Medway 1979, Stresemann 1949, 1950, 1953)." I don't know what the citations at the end refer to, who made the claim, or who claimed there was no evidence... As this is the most comprehensive source about the bird, it doesn't seem to be important then.
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:01, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Generally the authors stated at the end of a sentence like "Some authors hold that..." are the ones the text is referring to. BTW for your convenience I found the online Medway 1979 work
here and Stresemann's 1950 work
here. I think even citing these in the article should be enough.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words07:49, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Ah, thanks for the articles, they confirm my fear... They are articles about what birds Cook did collect, none mention the spotted pigeon, so they only support this part: "there is no evidence in the literature that a bird even faintly resembling a Spotted Green Pigeon was received by Banks after Cook’s third voyage". This means those that made the connection between Cook and the bird are not cited nor named... So not much I can add.
FunkMonk (
talk)
01:19, 1 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I think a solution would be to use the original source that told you about "those writers" in the first half of the sentence, and the second half could be sourced using these two articles.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words08:43, 2 February 2016 (UTC)reply
You mean keeping the sentence as it is? I don't think I can let those sources stand alone, since they don't mention the subject of this article they have to be used in conjunction with the article that makes them, otherwise it might seem like original synthesis... But I can definitely add them.
FunkMonk (
talk)
16:30, 2 February 2016 (UTC)reply
Well, I say, if the speculation thing has no evidence or much significance, then why add such a troublesome line? Remove it and be done with it if unless it would be too big a loss which I don't think it will be. Even if we agree on a compromise here, I feel it will surely stir up trouble at FAC!
Sainsf<^>Talk all words02:29, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
How about "Though Banks received many specimens from British explorer James Cook, and Davis received specimens from contacts in
New South Wales, implying a location in the South Pacific Ocean, there are no records of spotted green pigeons having been sent from these sources."
FunkMonk (
talk)
05:40, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
Davies' specimen was originally mounted, and was perhaps taxidermied by himself. I could not understand what you meant by "mounted". Also, what exactly are you "perhaps" about? Are you unsure if it was taxidermied or if it was he or someone else who did it? I think this needs a rejig.
Why should Gmelin be considered the authority for the present name if he was associated only with Columba maculata?
Because the original species name is the "important" name that will remain constant in whatever genus the animal is classified in... This is the standard in taxonomy.
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:01, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Rewrote it, it seems it might even have been an overstatement, it seems like the bird was barely mentioned at all, with a single publication (not known if the only one) considering it valid.
FunkMonk (
talk)
01:19, 1 February 2016 (UTC)reply
In 2001 Errol Fuller suggested that the bird had been historically overlooked because Rothschild (who had an obsessive interest in rare birds) dismissed it as an aberration, perhaps due to not owning the specimen himself, and therefore downplaying its significance. This description of Rothschild could be rejigged, it looks inappropriate as it is.
He also hypothesised the bird might have inhabited a Pacific island In the lead you specified it as "South" Pacific Ocean.
The mention in the lead is due to the sentence "Some writers speculated that the specimens could have been brought from the
South Pacific Ocean".
FunkMonk (
talk) 8:31 am, Today (UTC+1)
Who is Heupink? If not known you may simply write "2014 study of ancient DNA".
Added occupation. I don't think naming people is necessarily a problem as long as their occupation is noted. Especially not when it comes to seminal studies like this. Hasn't been a problem before, in any case.
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:38, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
...yet the genetic distance between the two was more than what is seen within other pigeon species, but similar to that between different species in the same genus I could not understand the part after the comma. Are you referring in general to a genus and its species or are you talking of Caloenas and its species?
Clarified, better? As for the addition to your comment, it is both about the distance generally seen, and the distance in Caloenas.
FunkMonk (
talk)
07:31, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
...suggests dispersal through island hopping and an origin for the spotted green pigeon in Oceania or Southeast Asia Should it not be "southeastern" Asia? I guess that is more proper unless you refer to some country like South Africa or North Korea. Same for South Asia in the last line of the section.
...indicates that the spotted green pigeon could also have originated somewhere in the Indian Ocean You don't mention the possibility of the bird's former occurrence anywhere near Indian Ocean in the lead.
In any case, it seems most likely that the bird inhabited an island location, like its relatives You may be asked to specify which relatives you refer to.
I think citation 4 should be placed at the end of the line Latham's slightly extended ... reads as follows: rather than inside the quote.
From what I've seen, the opposite is actually used in most FAs with quotes. In any case, hasn't been a problem for me in other articles.
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:25, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
... may already have been close to extinction by the time Europeans arrived in its native area Wait, you have not stated the range explicitly, then which area do you refer to? It could be the Pacific or the Indian Ocean, and we do not even know where exactly. Forget about the "when".
That's why I don't specify. Wherever it lived, it was native to somewhere, but we don't know where it is... But the information about European arrival would be the same.
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:04, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
OK, I see why this can not be specified. But if you are so sure of the European arrival, then you could add this to the lead and Taxonomy sections so that when one first comes across it they will know that this bird was native to some area in the Pacific where the European arrival is confirmed.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words07:26, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
What do you want added? We know Europeans encountered the birds in their native area because specimens were brought to Europe, not because there are accounts of their discovery in the wild. So it kind of goes without saying (and no source states it explicitly).
FunkMonk (
talk)
01:19, 1 February 2016 (UTC)reply
General : It would be better if you rearranged stuff and made it look like it has enough inline citations instead of "spreading over" citations for each paragraph by mentioning them at the end of each paragraph. Also, you must modify the lead as you modify the article.
Hmm, this is an optionable style issue, there's no rule as to which is better. Never had problems with this style. If everything in a paragraph is from the same source, only once citation is needed by the end.
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:14, 31 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Nice! Already have two FACs up, so have to wait until one of them passes... I'm surprised how little response the passenger pigeon has gotten, perhaps the article is intimidating...
FunkMonk (
talk)
06:44, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
You can only have one FAC up as sole nominator, but one more if it is a co-nomination... "An editor is allowed to be the sole nominator of only one article at a time; however, two nominations may be allowed if the editor is a co-nominator on at least one of them." But GANs are limitless.
FunkMonk (
talk)
12:57, 3 February 2016 (UTC)reply
A little bonus info I forgot to mention,
Sainsf, while researching for this article, I found the alternate version of the 1823 plate seen under description... I was puzzled because it differed so much from the version mentioned in the sources, so I asked Hein van Grouw (who wrote the latest detailed paper about the bird) about it in an email, and he said he had never seen it before... The weird thing is, it looks more like the existing skin than the other version of the drawing... So as it seems to have been overlooked, it is kind of "new" to science!
FunkMonk (
talk)
04:38, 6 February 2016 (UTC)reply
These two depictions of extinct birds
[1][2] I identified were also previously unknown in the literature according to
Julian P. Hume! So researching for Wikipedia can have benefits outside of improving articles...
FunkMonk (
talk)
04:54, 6 February 2016 (UTC)reply