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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 16:47, 27 December 2010 (UTC) reply

I'll be reviewing the article. Novice7 | Talk 16:47, 27 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Very good. Just minor issues.

Lead

• The album is not upcoming.

Done

Background and composition

• "It was also revealed that The-Dream will also not feature on the album version of the song when the.." – Maybe, "The-Dream will not be featured on the album version of the song.."?

Done

• The last sentence may need some tense fixes.

The quote from the song? Clarify please? Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 20:02, 27 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Reception

• About the A-side for Gimmie Dat, I guess it should be something like this – "The song was featured as the one of the A-sides for "Gimmie Dat", in the UK pressing, where the latter peaked at number 111 on the UK Singles chart." or similar.

Done, except I switched it around a bit because I didn't know what "UK pressing" meant. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 20:02, 27 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Others are very good. Just these issues. Novice7 | Talk 16:47, 27 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Pass. Novice7 | Talk 04:23, 28 December 2010 (UTC) reply