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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 08:37, 7 October 2019 (UTC) reply


This is in good shape. I have a few comments:

  • given the specific sea trial speed for this ship isn't known, perhaps it would be best to just use her designed speed in the infobox?
  • not sure where the range figure in the infobox comes from? Is it an average? Perhaps better to either use the range or the lower range?
  • were the main guns were behind gunshields or in turrets?
  • put (AA) after anti-aircraft
  • could you drop the .0 from the 21.0 in conversions?
  • where were the TTs located?
  • suggest adding Kuznetsov's rank
  • Done
  • say Berlevåg is in far northern Norway
  • Done
  • suggest linking Marine salvage in the lead
  • Done
  • link 1957 Soviet nuclear tests
  • Done

That's all I could find. Nice job on this. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 09:00, 7 October 2019 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 19:31, 8 October 2019 (UTC) reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 23:25, 15 October 2019 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 08:37, 7 October 2019 (UTC) reply


This is in good shape. I have a few comments:

  • given the specific sea trial speed for this ship isn't known, perhaps it would be best to just use her designed speed in the infobox?
  • not sure where the range figure in the infobox comes from? Is it an average? Perhaps better to either use the range or the lower range?
  • were the main guns were behind gunshields or in turrets?
  • put (AA) after anti-aircraft
  • could you drop the .0 from the 21.0 in conversions?
  • where were the TTs located?
  • suggest adding Kuznetsov's rank
  • Done
  • say Berlevåg is in far northern Norway
  • Done
  • suggest linking Marine salvage in the lead
  • Done
  • link 1957 Soviet nuclear tests
  • Done

That's all I could find. Nice job on this. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 09:00, 7 October 2019 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 19:31, 8 October 2019 (UTC) reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 23:25, 15 October 2019 (UTC) reply

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