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Reviewer: Pi.1415926535 ( talk · contribs) 04:45, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this review. Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 04:45, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
sea level lowstands during glacials- can this be reworded and/or wikilinked?
Bellingshausen and Thule Islandsinto two sentences.
It is roughly triangular with Salamander Point in the north, Hardy Point in the southwest, and Isaacson Point in the southeast.
Inland, part of the islanddoesn't parse. It needs rewritten, and needs explanation of why there are two different heights for the peak.
500 metres (1,600 ft)should be in adjective form.
One observation in 1962seems to be missing a word or two.
The simple structure of Bellingshausen Island implies it is probably among the most recently formed of the the South Sandwich Islands.
either island→
both islands
build→
built
Done, and if not commented here. Jo-Jo Eumerus ( talk) 10:35, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Pi.1415926535 ( talk · contribs) 04:45, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this review. Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 04:45, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
sea level lowstands during glacials- can this be reworded and/or wikilinked?
Bellingshausen and Thule Islandsinto two sentences.
It is roughly triangular with Salamander Point in the north, Hardy Point in the southwest, and Isaacson Point in the southeast.
Inland, part of the islanddoesn't parse. It needs rewritten, and needs explanation of why there are two different heights for the peak.
500 metres (1,600 ft)should be in adjective form.
One observation in 1962seems to be missing a word or two.
The simple structure of Bellingshausen Island implies it is probably among the most recently formed of the the South Sandwich Islands.
either island→
both islands
build→
built
Done, and if not commented here. Jo-Jo Eumerus ( talk) 10:35, 9 November 2023 (UTC)