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—Preceding unsigned comment added by Bellwether BC ( talk • contribs) 03:49, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
Hi Bellweather - happy to take a look at this article at your suggestion. There are a few points that I think need to be developed further, and I will try to work with you to see if we can resolve them.
It's my opinion that the section on Albrecht's death is too long; probably a single paragraph would be sufficient here, especially as there is a full-scale article on Albrecht. I think you've worked on that one as well, so any info in this article that isn't in that one should probably be moved over there. You might want to look closely at the refs for this article and pick out anything useful about Albrecht the musician to add to his separate article. Done
So - objectives for article improvement:
I will see if I can dig up some other refs, no guarantees mind you. Thanks for suggesting I take a look here. Risker ( talk) 01:59, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
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—Preceding unsigned comment added by Bellwether BC ( talk • contribs) 03:49, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
Hi Bellweather - happy to take a look at this article at your suggestion. There are a few points that I think need to be developed further, and I will try to work with you to see if we can resolve them.
It's my opinion that the section on Albrecht's death is too long; probably a single paragraph would be sufficient here, especially as there is a full-scale article on Albrecht. I think you've worked on that one as well, so any info in this article that isn't in that one should probably be moved over there. You might want to look closely at the refs for this article and pick out anything useful about Albrecht the musician to add to his separate article. Done
So - objectives for article improvement:
I will see if I can dig up some other refs, no guarantees mind you. Thanks for suggesting I take a look here. Risker ( talk) 01:59, 27 January 2008 (UTC)