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Reviewer: The Rambling Man ( talk · contribs) 20:13, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
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- "the two games have" repetitive here, maybe "they have" will suffice.
- "developed by Ancient" link?
- Both fair use images need to point directly at this article, not a redirect.
- File:GGSonic2SH.png has "yes" next to replaceable, that's not really suitable for fair use because if it is replaceable with something free, it should be. And how do we know it's the Game Gear version? It simply says "emulator" in the file details.
- I changed it to say Not replaceable, as the game is copyrighted. We know it's the Game Gear version because of the screenshot resolution. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 18:12, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- "Sonic to maneuver the levels in" Sonic in which to maneuver the levels.
- "for the Sega Genesis, stated" overlinked.
- "The Game Gear version" link Game Gear
- "platform.[19][7][22] " ref order
- "graphics,[25][24] even" similar.
- "additions.[19][8] Sega" ditto.
- "cutscene.[25][22][19][8]" and here.
- Could link cutscene.
- "control.[25][8] Mean" ref order.
- "graphical fidelity.[25][8] GamePro" same.
- Why in table is it called "Sega Game Gear" when it's just commonly called "Game Gear"?
- Are you asking why Game Gear is abbreviated to "SGG" in the review table? That's handled by the template when using the multi-platform feature and I can't change it. Maybe GG would be better, I don't know. Notice how Master System is not abbreviated, so there's not much uniformity in how those headers are decided. The headers are listed at Module:Video game reviews/data. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 18:12, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- Ref 13 needs en-dash and publication and/or accessdate.
- Ref 27 pp. and en-dash in range.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man ( Keep wearing the mask...) 16:29, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- @ The Rambling Man: I believe I took care of everything. I answered a couple questions above. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 18:12, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man ( talk · contribs) 20:13, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
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- "the two games have" repetitive here, maybe "they have" will suffice.
- "developed by Ancient" link?
- Both fair use images need to point directly at this article, not a redirect.
- File:GGSonic2SH.png has "yes" next to replaceable, that's not really suitable for fair use because if it is replaceable with something free, it should be. And how do we know it's the Game Gear version? It simply says "emulator" in the file details.
- I changed it to say Not replaceable, as the game is copyrighted. We know it's the Game Gear version because of the screenshot resolution. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 18:12, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- "Sonic to maneuver the levels in" Sonic in which to maneuver the levels.
- "for the Sega Genesis, stated" overlinked.
- "The Game Gear version" link Game Gear
- "platform.[19][7][22] " ref order
- "graphics,[25][24] even" similar.
- "additions.[19][8] Sega" ditto.
- "cutscene.[25][22][19][8]" and here.
- Could link cutscene.
- "control.[25][8] Mean" ref order.
- "graphical fidelity.[25][8] GamePro" same.
- Why in table is it called "Sega Game Gear" when it's just commonly called "Game Gear"?
- Are you asking why Game Gear is abbreviated to "SGG" in the review table? That's handled by the template when using the multi-platform feature and I can't change it. Maybe GG would be better, I don't know. Notice how Master System is not abbreviated, so there's not much uniformity in how those headers are decided. The headers are listed at Module:Video game reviews/data. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 18:12, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- Ref 13 needs en-dash and publication and/or accessdate.
- Ref 27 pp. and en-dash in range.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man ( Keep wearing the mask...) 16:29, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- @ The Rambling Man: I believe I took care of everything. I answered a couple questions above. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 18:12, 27 September 2021 (UTC)