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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin ( talk · contribs) 00:46, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
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Hi, just right off the bat I'm going to say that I see multiple significant issues with the article. Now, I haven't looked deep into the article yet, but I noticed some glaring issues on a quick look through. These include:
Now, I'm not trying to be harsh, just trying to lay down my concerns about this article. I won't quickfail because that's super disheartening and wastes time if you can address the issues, but as it is, there are significant issues with the article that need to be addressed. In time, I'll review the text more closely. I'd say... two weeks? Just to give you some extra time to work on it. If you need any help, you can ping me and I'll help where I can. I'll also ping @ TheJoebro64: to see if he's interested in helping, since I understand that he has experience with Sonic articles. :) - Cukie Gherkin ( talk) 00:46, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
Judging by how much info appears to be missing from the article, I think it'd be best to close the nomination. Do you think you can expand it adequately to fix these issues in a timely manner? @ Shadowboxer2005: If not, it may be better to resubmit down the road once you've improved the article. - Cukie Gherkin ( talk) 04:00, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin ( talk · contribs) 00:46, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Hi, just right off the bat I'm going to say that I see multiple significant issues with the article. Now, I haven't looked deep into the article yet, but I noticed some glaring issues on a quick look through. These include:
Now, I'm not trying to be harsh, just trying to lay down my concerns about this article. I won't quickfail because that's super disheartening and wastes time if you can address the issues, but as it is, there are significant issues with the article that need to be addressed. In time, I'll review the text more closely. I'd say... two weeks? Just to give you some extra time to work on it. If you need any help, you can ping me and I'll help where I can. I'll also ping @ TheJoebro64: to see if he's interested in helping, since I understand that he has experience with Sonic articles. :) - Cukie Gherkin ( talk) 00:46, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
Judging by how much info appears to be missing from the article, I think it'd be best to close the nomination. Do you think you can expand it adequately to fix these issues in a timely manner? @ Shadowboxer2005: If not, it may be better to resubmit down the road once you've improved the article. - Cukie Gherkin ( talk) 04:00, 25 May 2023 (UTC)