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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose ( talk · contribs) 08:27, 2 June 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Copyvio check - only one non-zero result found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector, and those matches are song titles, an attributed quote etc. I had no concerns about close paraphrasing after reading several of the sources.
Image - a fair use rationale is provided, but I note under "Licensing" that "It is believed that the use of scaled-down, low-resolution images of posters to provide critical commentary on the film, event, etc. in question or of the poster itself, not solely for illustration ... qualifies as fair use". I'm not sure that this criterion is met, so would like to know the argument for retaining the image.
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Background and development
In February 2002, Michel Legrand staged his first show in Manila at the Philippine International Convention Center (PICC) Plenary Hall with singer Kuh Ledesma- I'm not seeing where it confirms it was Legrand's first show in Manila. The Bunoan source does, however, confirm that.
"After she sang the first note, I told myself, that's for me! Let's get married. Musically of course!"- punctuation is different from the source, otherwise fine.
in Pasay- consider moving this to the first mention of the venue.
with Dove as its sponsor.- source mentions others, but I guess they may be subsidiary. Maybe "as a sponsor" instead? Any reason not to include "Facial Foam"?
Synopsis and reception
[T]here were no sexy dancers or fancy lighting to jazz up the musical numbers- no issues.
the first act featured Legrand and the San Miguel Philharmonic Orchestra playing overtures of the composer's notable works- I haven't seen the show, but I am not sure the source justifies the use of "notable"; later in the article there is a mention of the
exclusion of Legrand's widely popular works; whilst popular and notable aren't exactly the same thing, I believe they are related.
Set list and Personnel
aired as a two-part television special on May 11 and 18, 2003- no issues.
Infobox and lead
thanks for your work on the article, Pseud 14. I'm a bit concerned about the programme as a source, but that's not insurmountable, and all the other points are pretty minor. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 17:03, 2 June 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose ( talk · contribs) 08:27, 2 June 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Copyvio check - only one non-zero result found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector, and those matches are song titles, an attributed quote etc. I had no concerns about close paraphrasing after reading several of the sources.
Image - a fair use rationale is provided, but I note under "Licensing" that "It is believed that the use of scaled-down, low-resolution images of posters to provide critical commentary on the film, event, etc. in question or of the poster itself, not solely for illustration ... qualifies as fair use". I'm not sure that this criterion is met, so would like to know the argument for retaining the image.
Sources
Background and development
In February 2002, Michel Legrand staged his first show in Manila at the Philippine International Convention Center (PICC) Plenary Hall with singer Kuh Ledesma- I'm not seeing where it confirms it was Legrand's first show in Manila. The Bunoan source does, however, confirm that.
"After she sang the first note, I told myself, that's for me! Let's get married. Musically of course!"- punctuation is different from the source, otherwise fine.
in Pasay- consider moving this to the first mention of the venue.
with Dove as its sponsor.- source mentions others, but I guess they may be subsidiary. Maybe "as a sponsor" instead? Any reason not to include "Facial Foam"?
Synopsis and reception
[T]here were no sexy dancers or fancy lighting to jazz up the musical numbers- no issues.
the first act featured Legrand and the San Miguel Philharmonic Orchestra playing overtures of the composer's notable works- I haven't seen the show, but I am not sure the source justifies the use of "notable"; later in the article there is a mention of the
exclusion of Legrand's widely popular works; whilst popular and notable aren't exactly the same thing, I believe they are related.
Set list and Personnel
aired as a two-part television special on May 11 and 18, 2003- no issues.
Infobox and lead
thanks for your work on the article, Pseud 14. I'm a bit concerned about the programme as a source, but that's not insurmountable, and all the other points are pretty minor. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 17:03, 2 June 2023 (UTC)