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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing this article and have found a few nitpicks. Xtzou ( Talk) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
- ""Son of a Gun" was written by James Yoshimura based on a story by executive producer Tom Fontana, and was directed by Nick Gomez. It was the first Homicide: Life on the Street episode written by Yoshimura, who would serve as a writer and eventually supervising producer throughout the entirety of the series.[1] "Son of a Gun" featured a blending of hard-edged emotion and amusing character comedy, the combination of which would become common in future Yoshimura-penned episodes.[2] "Son of a Gun" was originally supposed to be the fourth episode of the first season of Homicide:" - Three out of four sentences contain the article name.
- Having read a couple of the articles now on this TV series, it there any explanation for why the episodes are continuing a downward trend in viewership, despite raves by critics?
Everything else about the article seems fine. Xtzou ( Talk) 22:51, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! — Hun ter Ka hn 03:52, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for the article. Xtzou ( Talk) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (
MoS):
- I corrected a few minor wording and punctuation issues.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- Article is well sourced. I see no original research.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- The article remains focused on the subject but covers the relevant areas.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
- Overall: A wonderful, concise article
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
A fine GA. Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing this article and have found a few nitpicks. Xtzou ( Talk) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
- ""Son of a Gun" was written by James Yoshimura based on a story by executive producer Tom Fontana, and was directed by Nick Gomez. It was the first Homicide: Life on the Street episode written by Yoshimura, who would serve as a writer and eventually supervising producer throughout the entirety of the series.[1] "Son of a Gun" featured a blending of hard-edged emotion and amusing character comedy, the combination of which would become common in future Yoshimura-penned episodes.[2] "Son of a Gun" was originally supposed to be the fourth episode of the first season of Homicide:" - Three out of four sentences contain the article name.
- Having read a couple of the articles now on this TV series, it there any explanation for why the episodes are continuing a downward trend in viewership, despite raves by critics?
Everything else about the article seems fine. Xtzou ( Talk) 22:51, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! — Hun ter Ka hn 03:52, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for the article. Xtzou ( Talk) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (
MoS):
- I corrected a few minor wording and punctuation issues.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- Article is well sourced. I see no original research.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- The article remains focused on the subject but covers the relevant areas.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
- Overall: A wonderful, concise article
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
A fine GA. Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)