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I have reviewed this article. The grammar was good; there were some capitalization errors, especially in section titles, and some cases in which a paragraph/sentence-based list was more appropriate than a bulleted or numbered list.
The content looks a bit brief for this topic; wikification will aid in readers' understanding, but some phases of this process are introduced without any discussion of their ramifications or important considerations. -
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I did some wikification and rewrote the lead section to be more forward, rather than like the slow introduction of a textbook. I still think that the article deserves more "meat on its bones." -
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Computing, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
computers,
computing, and
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Computer Security, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
computer security on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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This article was
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Paulmnguyen, a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, on 26 August 2010.Guild of Copy EditorsWikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy EditorsTemplate:WikiProject Guild of Copy EditorsGuild of Copy Editors articles
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I have reviewed this article. The grammar was good; there were some capitalization errors, especially in section titles, and some cases in which a paragraph/sentence-based list was more appropriate than a bulleted or numbered list.
The content looks a bit brief for this topic; wikification will aid in readers' understanding, but some phases of this process are introduced without any discussion of their ramifications or important considerations. -
Paulmnguyen (
talk)
23:52, 26 August 2010 (UTC)reply
I did some wikification and rewrote the lead section to be more forward, rather than like the slow introduction of a textbook. I still think that the article deserves more "meat on its bones." -
Paulmnguyen (
talk)
00:23, 27 August 2010 (UTC)reply