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Gerald Waldo Luis (
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15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
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I will review this article. This is my first bio GAN I review, and I would love to learn many things from this decision.
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15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
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Lead
Done and lead expanded. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Military career
Done except for the 3rd paragraph; citation 1 and 2 is reinforcing each other regarding the dates and fact. --Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Done --Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Trenggalek to Trenggalih
Done --Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Done --Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Parasamya Purnakarya Nugraha
Done --Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Legacy
Done --Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Infobox
Done Removed redlinks. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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00:48, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
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Governor of Irian Jaya
Done except point 1, as it is already linked in the lead. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Irian Jaya earthquake
Done Ah, my apologies. The X Valley was without name prior to the 2000s; it is now known as the Baliem Valley. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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12:35, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
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Jeromi Mikhael , last thing: in paragraph 3, ref 31 and 27 is used at the same time. Similar case at "Death", last sentence. Mind relocating or removing one of them, if appropriate?
Gerald
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12:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
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Done Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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13:01, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
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Jeromi Mikhael , in my opinon this has passed the GA criteria. Congrats!
Gerald
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13:03, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
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Gerald Waldo Luis , I've done what you requested. Please check. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael (
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14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
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Jeromi Mikhael , see "Irian Jaya earthquake" above. After that is resolved, I'll do a linking copyedit, and that should make it for a good article. Apologies for the wait.
Gerald
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09:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
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