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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 00:00, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
Happy to offer a review. I'm sorry to see that you have been waiting over three months; I fear that this may be because the article has a few problems which suggest, at first glance, that this is no ready for promotion to GA status.
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I don't think this is where it needs to be. The writing isn't great, expansion is needed in a good few places, and the sources leave a lot to be desired. I'm happy to leave this open to give you a chance to respond, but I do not think that the article is close to GA status. Czar, who has already commented on this article, has experience writing articles on topics like this; his advice will be invaluable for you. Josh Milburn ( talk) 00:29, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 00:00, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
Happy to offer a review. I'm sorry to see that you have been waiting over three months; I fear that this may be because the article has a few problems which suggest, at first glance, that this is no ready for promotion to GA status.
Josh Milburn (
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00:00, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
Some issues:
Some recommendations:
I don't think this is where it needs to be. The writing isn't great, expansion is needed in a good few places, and the sources leave a lot to be desired. I'm happy to leave this open to give you a chance to respond, but I do not think that the article is close to GA status. Czar, who has already commented on this article, has experience writing articles on topics like this; his advice will be invaluable for you. Josh Milburn ( talk) 00:29, 11 September 2016 (UTC)