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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 11:27, 27 July 2013 (UTC) reply

I am quickfailing this article. Please review WP:WIAGA before resubmitting. The first dozen paragraphs of the main body are void of WP:ICs. There are dozens and dozens of paragraphs that are in need of ICs. Each fact in the article is suppose to be WP:V from a WP:RS. Each paragraph in a well structured article should contain a different idea. Thus, each paragraph should have at least one IC. This article is a long way from being ready for WP:GAC.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 11:27, 27 July 2013 (UTC) reply