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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 00:17, 13 August 2023 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 00:17, 13 August 2023 (UTC) reply

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• when he was advanced to become first lieutenant of the 60-gun fourth rate HMS Sunderland, guardship at Sheerness.[1][10][11] He became Sunderland's second lieutenant on 15 February 1733 Is this out of order?

• Not according to the source. Looks like a more senior lieutenant came aboard.

• I presume that he was on half pay before taking command of Fougeaux?

• Assume so but no source explicitly says

• I suggest adding an OCLC # for all pre-1970s sources.

• Added

• Nicely done.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 08:44, 19 August 2023 (UTC) reply

@ Sturmvogel 66: Hi, thanks for taking a look! I've responded above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe ( talk) 16:04, 21 August 2023 (UTC) reply