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Nominator: ZKang123 ( talk · contribs) 11:44, 29 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave ( talk · contribs) 13:31, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

I'll be reviewing this article soon. Rollinginhisgrave ( talk) 13:31, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

General Comments

Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to reviewing it. I'll be dropping in concerns/questions here as I go. Rollinginhisgrave ( talk) 14:00, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Prose and content

  • Designed in a modernist style This can all be implied by applying modernist as an adjective to an article.
  • The SCH houses the Singapore Chinese Orchestra (SCO), and the concert hall has a capacity of 831 people. awkward link between clauses.
  • 00055C pt TS 30 could you explain why this should be included without an explanation of its parts?
  • the building measures use metric as the base for Singapore.
  • serving as an expression of local identity inappropriate inclusion for this section, if it's to be included.
  • Provisions on the roof what are provisions on the roof?

Suggestions

  • Move source for national monument to infobox.

Rollinginhisgrave ( talk) 14:00, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Nominator: ZKang123 ( talk · contribs) 11:44, 29 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave ( talk · contribs) 13:31, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

I'll be reviewing this article soon. Rollinginhisgrave ( talk) 13:31, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

General Comments

Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to reviewing it. I'll be dropping in concerns/questions here as I go. Rollinginhisgrave ( talk) 14:00, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Prose and content

  • Designed in a modernist style This can all be implied by applying modernist as an adjective to an article.
  • The SCH houses the Singapore Chinese Orchestra (SCO), and the concert hall has a capacity of 831 people. awkward link between clauses.
  • 00055C pt TS 30 could you explain why this should be included without an explanation of its parts?
  • the building measures use metric as the base for Singapore.
  • serving as an expression of local identity inappropriate inclusion for this section, if it's to be included.
  • Provisions on the roof what are provisions on the roof?

Suggestions

  • Move source for national monument to infobox.

Rollinginhisgrave ( talk) 14:00, 31 July 2024 (UTC) reply


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