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Limelightangel ( talk) 18:35, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Looking at some articles about mountains in Arizona a possible paragraph division may include these topics:
it would be nice adding also a paragraph named "location" to show more in detail the precise location where the mountain stands.
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 20:36, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
We could add also a paragraph named "Gallery" (at the bottom maybe?) there we can put more images of the topic.
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:53, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
There is already a page on Superstition Mountains, where there are many useful information and sources.
LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 18:41, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
Maybe we can create a sort of table in which we can put the different hiking routes schematically in order not to bore the readers with too much infos and make the reading clearer and "faster".
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:29, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
Changed the "Hiking Trails" heading in "Recreational Activicties" in order to add more general content on Silly Mountain Park, it would be useful to add more information on services and activicties at Silly Mountain LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 11:47, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
A new section about fauna of the area has been created. this section could be improved with some useful information. Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 19:55, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
The section on fauna has been enriched whith a subsection on birdwatching, that still needs some improvements. LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 16:51, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
It can be interesting adding information about the hiking trails offered at Silly Mountain Park. There are some useful information here silly mountain hiking trails
Team5DTMaddalena (
talk) 21:44, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
A paragraph about the creation of Silly Mountain Park has been created, it could be improve with useful information. https://worldofarizona.com/silly-mountain-park/ Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 14:48, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
I added an image in the paragraph of Silly Mountain Park. The photo shows the "silly mountain park" entry sign.
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 20:24, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Doubts about the last paragraph created. It may not be relevant if it is not further developed. Request for suggestions.
Team5DTVanessa (
talk) 09:44, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
The sections "Silly Mountain Park" and "Silly Mountain conservation works" should be merged because they mainly cover the same information. Team5DTElija ( talk) 09:58, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
For consistency of the page, perhaps, it is worth using the same type of primary measurements (meters, kilometers vs feet, miles). For example, in the infobox, meters are used, but in the table of hiking trails, feet/miles are used to describe length.
Team5DTElija (
talk) 11:32, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
information about some trials in the table is missing, it could be implemented. Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 15:14, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
New relevant images on Silly Mountain need to be added in the Gallery section. LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 15:31, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Other links are needed to expand the box "Links to related articles" just added in the bottom of the page. Team5DTVanessa ( talk) 14:25, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
A table showing the recent ascents of Silly Mountain (from 2001 to 2022) has just been created. please check the format. -- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 09:08, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
Some data in the table about trails is missing, it could be implemented and corrected. Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 07:58, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
a live-interactive map showing the location of Silly Mountain has been added in the section "location". please check and try to enhance it possibly. -- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:41, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
the section "gallery" is too poor. it should be improved with more images. -- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:45, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
Some internal links could be implemented in the paragraph "Fauna". Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 09:12, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
new images have been added, mainly in the section "gallery". Please have a look and check the format. Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 17:25, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
maybe it is better to remove the table of the trails completely as the external user suggested in order to make this page published Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 14:03, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
Note the guidelines/help on using Talk pages, and look at some existing Talk pages. You need to create section headers for these to structure the themes. You do not use things like 'Guys"! Try to avoid personal tense e.g. 'I'. Correct the spelling error. You can edit the above section to fix these. Limelightangel ( talk) 20:12, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
Reference 2 needs to correctly use the Cite>Journal template, including the authors names and the publisher. You all need to add section headings in the Talk page, structure your discussions for clarity and edit the missing ones Limelightangel ( talk) 11:22, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
Reference 4 (Tom Kollenborn Chronicle) may not be accepted by Wikipedia, because it is a blog. Suggested by others required. Thanks. Team5DTVanessa ( talk) 08:24, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
Reference 9 ("Not really a mountain; more an interesting hill.") should be corrected. Team5DTElija ( talk) 01:59, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
References for the Fauna section are missing and should be added Team5DTElija ( talk) 23:00, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
There is a relevant Infobox template for pages on mountains: Template:Infobox_mountain. It is used on many pages, like: Uluru. You can see how it has been used on this page by inspecting the markup (Edit). It is not necessary to complete all the fields in this template. There are predefined rules for the content you can add to each field in the template. See the Infobox help at: Help:Infobox Limelightangel ( talk) 11:32, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:36, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
I suggest you try to research and source more content to establish notability and depth on the topic. This may involve contacting the Park for notable sources and information on the area. Google Books contains useful information from acceptable sources e.g.
etc.
Please advise your students to follow some of the basic rules outlined in the Manual of Style, especially those on bolding, duplicate links, and overlinked terms. They have also removed valid citation needed tags from statements without providing a source. I've been reverting quite a few of their edits over the past few hours and see that there's still hundreds that need to be checked for compliance. SounderBruce 10:41, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I will reinforce this with them, be having meetings with them to review their recent work and the many issues. They have repeatedly had this advice but clearly need it emphasizing. Thanks for the feedback. Limelightangel (talk) 14:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:05, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
thanks a lot for the help @ Limelightangel the suggestions about geology will be followed Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 15:22, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 12:30, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
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Limelightangel ( talk) 18:35, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Looking at some articles about mountains in Arizona a possible paragraph division may include these topics:
it would be nice adding also a paragraph named "location" to show more in detail the precise location where the mountain stands.
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 20:36, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
We could add also a paragraph named "Gallery" (at the bottom maybe?) there we can put more images of the topic.
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:53, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
There is already a page on Superstition Mountains, where there are many useful information and sources.
LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 18:41, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
Maybe we can create a sort of table in which we can put the different hiking routes schematically in order not to bore the readers with too much infos and make the reading clearer and "faster".
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:29, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
Changed the "Hiking Trails" heading in "Recreational Activicties" in order to add more general content on Silly Mountain Park, it would be useful to add more information on services and activicties at Silly Mountain LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 11:47, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
A new section about fauna of the area has been created. this section could be improved with some useful information. Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 19:55, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
The section on fauna has been enriched whith a subsection on birdwatching, that still needs some improvements. LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 16:51, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
It can be interesting adding information about the hiking trails offered at Silly Mountain Park. There are some useful information here silly mountain hiking trails
Team5DTMaddalena (
talk) 21:44, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
A paragraph about the creation of Silly Mountain Park has been created, it could be improve with useful information. https://worldofarizona.com/silly-mountain-park/ Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 14:48, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
I added an image in the paragraph of Silly Mountain Park. The photo shows the "silly mountain park" entry sign.
-- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 20:24, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Doubts about the last paragraph created. It may not be relevant if it is not further developed. Request for suggestions.
Team5DTVanessa (
talk) 09:44, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
The sections "Silly Mountain Park" and "Silly Mountain conservation works" should be merged because they mainly cover the same information. Team5DTElija ( talk) 09:58, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
For consistency of the page, perhaps, it is worth using the same type of primary measurements (meters, kilometers vs feet, miles). For example, in the infobox, meters are used, but in the table of hiking trails, feet/miles are used to describe length.
Team5DTElija (
talk) 11:32, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
information about some trials in the table is missing, it could be implemented. Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 15:14, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
New relevant images on Silly Mountain need to be added in the Gallery section. LIUC06ca.alfieri ( talk) 15:31, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Other links are needed to expand the box "Links to related articles" just added in the bottom of the page. Team5DTVanessa ( talk) 14:25, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
A table showing the recent ascents of Silly Mountain (from 2001 to 2022) has just been created. please check the format. -- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 09:08, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
Some data in the table about trails is missing, it could be implemented and corrected. Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 07:58, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
a live-interactive map showing the location of Silly Mountain has been added in the section "location". please check and try to enhance it possibly. -- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:41, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
the section "gallery" is too poor. it should be improved with more images. -- Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 15:45, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
Some internal links could be implemented in the paragraph "Fauna". Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 09:12, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
new images have been added, mainly in the section "gallery". Please have a look and check the format. Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 17:25, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
maybe it is better to remove the table of the trails completely as the external user suggested in order to make this page published Team5DTMaddalena ( talk) 14:03, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
Note the guidelines/help on using Talk pages, and look at some existing Talk pages. You need to create section headers for these to structure the themes. You do not use things like 'Guys"! Try to avoid personal tense e.g. 'I'. Correct the spelling error. You can edit the above section to fix these. Limelightangel ( talk) 20:12, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
Reference 2 needs to correctly use the Cite>Journal template, including the authors names and the publisher. You all need to add section headings in the Talk page, structure your discussions for clarity and edit the missing ones Limelightangel ( talk) 11:22, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
Reference 4 (Tom Kollenborn Chronicle) may not be accepted by Wikipedia, because it is a blog. Suggested by others required. Thanks. Team5DTVanessa ( talk) 08:24, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
Reference 9 ("Not really a mountain; more an interesting hill.") should be corrected. Team5DTElija ( talk) 01:59, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
References for the Fauna section are missing and should be added Team5DTElija ( talk) 23:00, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
There is a relevant Infobox template for pages on mountains: Template:Infobox_mountain. It is used on many pages, like: Uluru. You can see how it has been used on this page by inspecting the markup (Edit). It is not necessary to complete all the fields in this template. There are predefined rules for the content you can add to each field in the template. See the Infobox help at: Help:Infobox Limelightangel ( talk) 11:32, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:36, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
I suggest you try to research and source more content to establish notability and depth on the topic. This may involve contacting the Park for notable sources and information on the area. Google Books contains useful information from acceptable sources e.g.
etc.
Please advise your students to follow some of the basic rules outlined in the Manual of Style, especially those on bolding, duplicate links, and overlinked terms. They have also removed valid citation needed tags from statements without providing a source. I've been reverting quite a few of their edits over the past few hours and see that there's still hundreds that need to be checked for compliance. SounderBruce 10:41, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I will reinforce this with them, be having meetings with them to review their recent work and the many issues. They have repeatedly had this advice but clearly need it emphasizing. Thanks for the feedback. Limelightangel (talk) 14:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:05, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
thanks a lot for the help @ Limelightangel the suggestions about geology will be followed Team5DTGiacomo ( talk) 15:22, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 12:30, 12 December 2022 (UTC)