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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 ( talk) 01:21, 27 January 2010 (UTC)
I have taken the liberty of boldly making some tweaks and copy edits for clarity and prose issues. There are some areas that are ambiguous.
Thankyou very much. I am extremely busy at work at the moment, but I'll get on to these problems (and the ones on the other article) when I can. Regards--
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 ( talk) 01:21, 27 January 2010 (UTC)
I have taken the liberty of boldly making some tweaks and copy edits for clarity and prose issues. There are some areas that are ambiguous.
Thankyou very much. I am extremely busy at work at the moment, but I'll get on to these problems (and the ones on the other article) when I can. Regards--
Jackyd101 (
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21:24, 2 February 2010 (UTC)