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This article seems to contain an excess of literary device. It reads not like a staid encyclopedic piece but a biographical narrative. Do I merely need to start changing the text? I will do some searching on this character. I can think of some good improvements. But an obvious one is to rid the current writing of its personal flair - if nobody objects, that is. -- Homunculus ( strange tales) 01:29, 11 March 2010 (UTC)
The book, Geeks & Geezers: How Era, Values, and Defining Moments Shape Leaders, by Warren G. Bennis and Robert J. Thomas has some good information about Sidney Rittenberg. -- MLKLewis ( talk) 00:08, 7 July 2011 (UTC)
Also Letters from China, by Anna Louise Strong -- MLKLewis ( talk) 00:12, 7 July 2011 (UTC)
Is there some communist specific definition of the word "struggle" that is independent of the actual definition? If there is I think it would be worthwhile to incorporate it as the article repeatedly uses the word in a non-standard way.
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The German article provides greater detail. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.48.238.18 ( talk) 17:03, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
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This article seems to contain an excess of literary device. It reads not like a staid encyclopedic piece but a biographical narrative. Do I merely need to start changing the text? I will do some searching on this character. I can think of some good improvements. But an obvious one is to rid the current writing of its personal flair - if nobody objects, that is. -- Homunculus ( strange tales) 01:29, 11 March 2010 (UTC)
The book, Geeks & Geezers: How Era, Values, and Defining Moments Shape Leaders, by Warren G. Bennis and Robert J. Thomas has some good information about Sidney Rittenberg. -- MLKLewis ( talk) 00:08, 7 July 2011 (UTC)
Also Letters from China, by Anna Louise Strong -- MLKLewis ( talk) 00:12, 7 July 2011 (UTC)
Is there some communist specific definition of the word "struggle" that is independent of the actual definition? If there is I think it would be worthwhile to incorporate it as the article repeatedly uses the word in a non-standard way.
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