A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
"In an interview with Interview" → Maybe for clarity, it would be best to say "In an interview with Interview magazine".
Composition
No issues.
Reception
No issues.
Live performances
At the Jimmy Kimmel concert, she actually sang I'll Be Lovin' You Long Time as part of a mix with Touch My Body, like on the MTV Teen Choice Awards and MTV VMAs in Japan, not as separate songs/performances.
"Do date, it is the only live performance of the song." → This isn't needed, it's kinda irrelevant.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
"In an interview with Interview" → Maybe for clarity, it would be best to say "In an interview with Interview magazine".
Composition
No issues.
Reception
No issues.
Live performances
At the Jimmy Kimmel concert, she actually sang I'll Be Lovin' You Long Time as part of a mix with Touch My Body, like on the MTV Teen Choice Awards and MTV VMAs in Japan, not as separate songs/performances.
"Do date, it is the only live performance of the song." → This isn't needed, it's kinda irrelevant.