Newspaper sources need locations added. For publications where the location is given, I would advise you to remove them (ie: Cleveland Scene Weekly) for reasons obvious.
Domains are not the same as publishers.
Lead
"From 1993 to 1999, Breckin attended classes at the Roundhay School, and received GCE Advanced Level qualification in the field of drama.", although this is the qualification's correct title, I would suggest you use its colloquial name, amongst students, teachers and publication style guides in Britain – the A-Level. So the sentence would become '...recieved an A-Level in drama'.
"Breckin had a recurring role as Deena Hardman on the 2012 television series Hollyoaks.", Hollyoaks is a recurring soap drama in Britain. How the sentence is worded may give the impression that it was a one-off series, first shown in 2012. You need to reword this, to state Breckin appeared in Hollyoaks in 2012.
Career
Sky News is not italicised.
Is it "Breckin guest-starred opposite series regular" "Breckin guest starred on the television drama..." -- hyphenated or not?
Newspaper sources need locations added. For publications where the location is given, I would advise you to remove them (ie: Cleveland Scene Weekly) for reasons obvious.
Domains are not the same as publishers.
Lead
"From 1993 to 1999, Breckin attended classes at the Roundhay School, and received GCE Advanced Level qualification in the field of drama.", although this is the qualification's correct title, I would suggest you use its colloquial name, amongst students, teachers and publication style guides in Britain – the A-Level. So the sentence would become '...recieved an A-Level in drama'.
"Breckin had a recurring role as Deena Hardman on the 2012 television series Hollyoaks.", Hollyoaks is a recurring soap drama in Britain. How the sentence is worded may give the impression that it was a one-off series, first shown in 2012. You need to reword this, to state Breckin appeared in Hollyoaks in 2012.
Career
Sky News is not italicised.
Is it "Breckin guest-starred opposite series regular" "Breckin guest starred on the television drama..." -- hyphenated or not?