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I deled a non-verifiable statement in the lead and added two sentences explaining the principle of shopper marketing and the difference between itself and retail marketing. I referenced my source for the information. The sentences were written in a formal tone to increase formality and reduce the personal tone of the article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Unioli ( talk • contribs) 2:46, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
I deleted a non-verifiable statement that credited P&G and Sam's Club as the founders of shopper marketing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Unioli ( talk • contribs) 02:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
I reworded the first sentence of the description section to increase formality. I also moved some information from the description section to the lead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Painfulprincess123 ( talk • contribs) 02:47, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
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I deled a non-verifiable statement in the lead and added two sentences explaining the principle of shopper marketing and the difference between itself and retail marketing. I referenced my source for the information. The sentences were written in a formal tone to increase formality and reduce the personal tone of the article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Unioli ( talk • contribs) 2:46, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
I deleted a non-verifiable statement that credited P&G and Sam's Club as the founders of shopper marketing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Unioli ( talk • contribs) 02:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
I reworded the first sentence of the description section to increase formality. I also moved some information from the description section to the lead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Painfulprincess123 ( talk • contribs) 02:47, 23 March 2022 (UTC)