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Reviewer: Vincent60030 ( talk · contribs) 05:26, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
I would say this article looks good if you were to look through it briefly and I can see great efforts have been done to improve this article. Checklinks reports no deadlinks, just a few minor path changes. However, the history section looks a little bit too long so try to split the section to a few subsections. On with the review......
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@ Mattbuck: Oh and did you notice that Wikiproject Bristol "suggests" that a map would be included in the article? Vincent60030 ( talk) 15:25, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vincent60030 ( talk · contribs) 05:26, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
I would say this article looks good if you were to look through it briefly and I can see great efforts have been done to improve this article. Checklinks reports no deadlinks, just a few minor path changes. However, the history section looks a little bit too long so try to split the section to a few subsections. On with the review......
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@ Mattbuck: Oh and did you notice that Wikiproject Bristol "suggests" that a map would be included in the article? Vincent60030 ( talk) 15:25, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
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