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Instead of just creating articles and requesting good article status right away, you should have others look at/read/edit the articles, first. Flesh them out first, see if they actually meet notability requirements and find more substantial sourcing. Don't be in such a rush. StarcheerspeaksnewslostwarsTalk to me01:15, 6 August 2020 (UTC)reply
In the sentence, Finneas cries as the dancers turn shove and toss him roughly around the riverbed. Add a "to" between the "turn" and "shove".
Add a space in the lead between "that" and "Avicii".
In the Background and composition section, in the phrase ...but has an undercurrent of trouble. "They call us lucky... remove the period and replace it with a "saying".
b. - Manual of Style
There should be information in the lead about the song being originally written for Avicii to sing.
Move the phrase Finneas had heard that Avicii was looking for songs to produce. He wrote the song and sent it to Avicii's team. to before the phrase It was released by OYOY as the third single from the EP on August 22, 2019.
In between those two phrases, type It is unknown if Avicii ever listened to the song.
Add a "later" between "It was" and "released by".
In the lead, remove the phrase, A pop song, as it is not needed.
2. - Verifiable
a. - List of references
No action needed.
b. - Reliable sources
No action needed.
c. - No original research
No action needed.
d. - No copyright violations
No action needed.
3. - Broad
a. - Main Aspects
Are you sure that this is a single? It isn't listed as a single on iTunes or AllMusic. The citation for its release links to the music video on iTunes which can't be downloaded. If it was a single, it most likely would've charted in the USA.
Really nice article. It is a short article, but all information that is available is in this article. I'll put this On hold for 7 days this time because the improvements are easy.
Lazman321 (
talk)
17:02, 17 September 2020 (UTC)reply
Hey
Lazman321, sorry it took so long to respond. I have been going through a lot and have just not lost my motivation to continue good articles. I will finish my review for your article today. You can go ahead and fail the review.
The Ultimate Boss (
talk)
11:16, 22 September 2020 (UTC)reply
"is set at a dance tempo." → "is set in a dance
tempo." with the wikilink
Merge the final para with this one in the new order
"is about a love for a girl that brings" → "is about a lover that brings"
""They call us" → "He represents the trouble with the lyrics, "They call us"
"for the track only gets more urgent as it continues." → "of the track becomes more urgent as it continues:"
Critical reception
"received mainly positive reviews" → "was met with mainly positive reviews"
"noted that Shelter was" → "noted that "Shelter" was"
"he produces for his sister [Billie] [Eilish]"." → "[Finneas] produces for his sister [Billie Eilish]"." and add the wikilink to her in the way that it is done
"while he mentions that it's" → "while mentioning that its"
"stated that with "Shelter" it" → "stated that the song"
"and calls the production" → "and he called the production"
Ref 6 is not the correct ref, since you should be citing one that verifies the release of the song as a single, not its music video's release and cite various retailers with the countries in brackets
Final comments and verdict
On hold after reviewing this short article, though it is quite close to the criteria.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pop music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
pop music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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Instead of just creating articles and requesting good article status right away, you should have others look at/read/edit the articles, first. Flesh them out first, see if they actually meet notability requirements and find more substantial sourcing. Don't be in such a rush. StarcheerspeaksnewslostwarsTalk to me01:15, 6 August 2020 (UTC)reply
In the sentence, Finneas cries as the dancers turn shove and toss him roughly around the riverbed. Add a "to" between the "turn" and "shove".
Add a space in the lead between "that" and "Avicii".
In the Background and composition section, in the phrase ...but has an undercurrent of trouble. "They call us lucky... remove the period and replace it with a "saying".
b. - Manual of Style
There should be information in the lead about the song being originally written for Avicii to sing.
Move the phrase Finneas had heard that Avicii was looking for songs to produce. He wrote the song and sent it to Avicii's team. to before the phrase It was released by OYOY as the third single from the EP on August 22, 2019.
In between those two phrases, type It is unknown if Avicii ever listened to the song.
Add a "later" between "It was" and "released by".
In the lead, remove the phrase, A pop song, as it is not needed.
2. - Verifiable
a. - List of references
No action needed.
b. - Reliable sources
No action needed.
c. - No original research
No action needed.
d. - No copyright violations
No action needed.
3. - Broad
a. - Main Aspects
Are you sure that this is a single? It isn't listed as a single on iTunes or AllMusic. The citation for its release links to the music video on iTunes which can't be downloaded. If it was a single, it most likely would've charted in the USA.
Really nice article. It is a short article, but all information that is available is in this article. I'll put this On hold for 7 days this time because the improvements are easy.
Lazman321 (
talk)
17:02, 17 September 2020 (UTC)reply
Hey
Lazman321, sorry it took so long to respond. I have been going through a lot and have just not lost my motivation to continue good articles. I will finish my review for your article today. You can go ahead and fail the review.
The Ultimate Boss (
talk)
11:16, 22 September 2020 (UTC)reply
"is set at a dance tempo." → "is set in a dance
tempo." with the wikilink
Merge the final para with this one in the new order
"is about a love for a girl that brings" → "is about a lover that brings"
""They call us" → "He represents the trouble with the lyrics, "They call us"
"for the track only gets more urgent as it continues." → "of the track becomes more urgent as it continues:"
Critical reception
"received mainly positive reviews" → "was met with mainly positive reviews"
"noted that Shelter was" → "noted that "Shelter" was"
"he produces for his sister [Billie] [Eilish]"." → "[Finneas] produces for his sister [Billie Eilish]"." and add the wikilink to her in the way that it is done
"while he mentions that it's" → "while mentioning that its"
"stated that with "Shelter" it" → "stated that the song"
"and calls the production" → "and he called the production"
Ref 6 is not the correct ref, since you should be citing one that verifies the release of the song as a single, not its music video's release and cite various retailers with the countries in brackets
Final comments and verdict
On hold after reviewing this short article, though it is quite close to the criteria.