Hey. I'll be doing the review for this article. I've read through it, and here are some suggestions for improvement:
That's about it. I fixed a couple of the sentences, because in most cases, the word "however" shouldn't be at the beginning of a sentence. The sources all look good, and the pictures are all either from the commons or have an appropriate fair-use rationale. The article will be on hold for seven days for the improvements. Nikki 311 05:23, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
Hey. I'll be doing the review for this article. I've read through it, and here are some suggestions for improvement:
That's about it. I fixed a couple of the sentences, because in most cases, the word "however" shouldn't be at the beginning of a sentence. The sources all look good, and the pictures are all either from the commons or have an appropriate fair-use rationale. The article will be on hold for seven days for the improvements. Nikki 311 05:23, 29 May 2008 (UTC)