"He joined the Ducks American Hockey League (AHL) affiliate," - just the acronyms AHL will suffice since the full name is mentioned in previous paragraph of the article Done
Professional
"In the 1–0 win which ended the Flames' home win streak," - repetition of the word "win" Done
"He would later recorded his first career NHL goal " - the text in bold can be changed to would later record or later recorded Done
"an amount he estimated suppressed 15." - 15 times. Done
"and was praised for his skating ability." - praised by whom? Done
"due to the contract dispute." - what contract dispute? Please elaborate further where possible since this is the first time the contract dispute is mentioned in the article Done
"was invited to drop the Ceremonial first puck" - no need to captalize the word highlighted in bold Done
"during the Golden Knights Hockey Fights Cancer game on November 22, 2019." - Langley Advance Times says the game happened on November 21 not November 22 Done
"He joined the Ducks American Hockey League (AHL) affiliate," - just the acronyms AHL will suffice since the full name is mentioned in previous paragraph of the article Done
Professional
"In the 1–0 win which ended the Flames' home win streak," - repetition of the word "win" Done
"He would later recorded his first career NHL goal " - the text in bold can be changed to would later record or later recorded Done
"an amount he estimated suppressed 15." - 15 times. Done
"and was praised for his skating ability." - praised by whom? Done
"due to the contract dispute." - what contract dispute? Please elaborate further where possible since this is the first time the contract dispute is mentioned in the article Done
"was invited to drop the Ceremonial first puck" - no need to captalize the word highlighted in bold Done
"during the Golden Knights Hockey Fights Cancer game on November 22, 2019." - Langley Advance Times says the game happened on November 21 not November 22 Done