Not done I think that only works for the singles template. I tried putting it in, but nothing showed up. I might be doing it wrong. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Strange, I thought it had the parameter. Take a look at
my proposal if ya want to. :D
In the second sentence you should use the stage names for Dr. Luke and Benny Blanco so that readers do not think their were five people involved, instead of three
AGH Can't believe I forgot that in the first place. Used a completely different portion of the song to match the new time frame. Fixed --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:33, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Well, since I'm pretty sure they were speaking of her vocals, I changed it to "jagged and distorted vocals in the chorus" --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Auto-Tuned in lead, auto-tuned here - be consistent
Fixed "Lyrically, the song has varying emotions in its lyrics, speaking of flirting, betrayal, and a sense of entrapment as well as self loathing in her relationship with fame." --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:24, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Reception
Repeating the quote in the image caption is a bit POV
Fixed
You need to identify writers here, as newspapers don't form opinions; their writers do
said the song and 'Womanizer' "use their pulsing..." - Womanizer should have double quote marks ("), and reword so that you don't have two quote marks next to each other
How do you know that it is digital downloads? Maybe include a bit about the Digital Songs charting here
Because it has to be. There is no sign of any other kind of release her except for digital download on the album. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Billboard has failed to show that Shattered Glass charted on its official website, so we can't compare it to other songs from Circus. Anyway, it says nearly the same thing. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:21, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
lol I'm blind. Fixed Used allmusic and aCharts instead. Also removed that it was there for two weeks, since I guess it isn't true. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:17, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Not done I think that only works for the singles template. I tried putting it in, but nothing showed up. I might be doing it wrong. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Strange, I thought it had the parameter. Take a look at
my proposal if ya want to. :D
In the second sentence you should use the stage names for Dr. Luke and Benny Blanco so that readers do not think their were five people involved, instead of three
AGH Can't believe I forgot that in the first place. Used a completely different portion of the song to match the new time frame. Fixed --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:33, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Well, since I'm pretty sure they were speaking of her vocals, I changed it to "jagged and distorted vocals in the chorus" --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Auto-Tuned in lead, auto-tuned here - be consistent
Fixed "Lyrically, the song has varying emotions in its lyrics, speaking of flirting, betrayal, and a sense of entrapment as well as self loathing in her relationship with fame." --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:24, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Reception
Repeating the quote in the image caption is a bit POV
Fixed
You need to identify writers here, as newspapers don't form opinions; their writers do
said the song and 'Womanizer' "use their pulsing..." - Womanizer should have double quote marks ("), and reword so that you don't have two quote marks next to each other
How do you know that it is digital downloads? Maybe include a bit about the Digital Songs charting here
Because it has to be. There is no sign of any other kind of release her except for digital download on the album. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Billboard has failed to show that Shattered Glass charted on its official website, so we can't compare it to other songs from Circus. Anyway, it says nearly the same thing. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:21, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply
lol I'm blind. Fixed Used allmusic and aCharts instead. Also removed that it was there for two weeks, since I guess it isn't true. --
ĈÞЯİŒ1ооо22:17, 10 March 2011 (UTC)reply