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Reviewer: Darkwind ( talk · contribs) 04:23, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
A good article is—
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(a) (prose) | Pass | |
(b) (MoS) | Lead: Layout: Words to watch: {{
as of}} .Fiction: |
Pass |
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(a) (references) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
(b) (citations to reliable sources) | The following do not appear to be reliable sources: Otherwise, all primary sources are used appropriately to cite direct statistics and other non-contentious information. |
Pass |
(c) (original research) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
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(a) (major aspects) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
(b) (focused) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
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The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
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The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
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Pass | The reviewer has no notes here. |
I haven't finished my initial review yet, since it's harder than I expected to do it on my iPad. I'll complete my initial notes within the next day or two at most. — Darkwind ( talk) 04:53, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
What I did about your Mos comments is enough? About the MSN, well, it starts to difficult to me since I looked every place and I couldn't find other sources but I'll try. Any suggestion about where I can find I RS for it, DragonZero? Gabriel Yuji ( talk) 05:40, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Almost done - just a bit of work on the sourcing. — Darkwind ( talk) 07:39, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Any other issues, Darkwind? Gabriel Yuji ( talk) 02:27, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
For example, the second paragraph of the lead could be cut down as such:
The Shaman King manga was originally serialized in Shueisha's Weekly Shōnen Jump between 1998 and 2004. It was adapted into an animated television series produced by Xebec and co-produced by TV Tokyo, which aired on Japan's TV Tokyo network from 2001 to 2002. The manga has also been reprinted in a kanzenban edition called Shaman King Kanzen-Ban (or "Perfect Edition"). The series has spawned video games, a trading card game, and many types of Shaman King-related merchandise.
Just make sure that any specifics removed from the lead are given elsewhere in the article (e.g. the exact air dates of the anime should be in the subsection discussing the anime, not the lead, and the same with the exact length of the manga). — Darkwind ( talk) 07:23, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
The plot summary can be given some context by introducing it with a sentence containing real-world perspective. For example, you could do something like "The plot of Shaman King focuses on the interaction between Manta Oyamada and Yoh Asakura." Or, as the plot summary progresses through the timeline of the series, you could begin each paragraph of the plot summary with "In volumes 10 through 15, <stuff happens>." See the last paragraph of the "plot summaries" section of MOS:FICTION for details. — Darkwind ( talk) 07:23, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Darkwind ( talk · contribs) 04:23, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
A good article is—
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (prose) | Pass | |
(b) (MoS) | Lead: Layout: Words to watch: {{
as of}} .Fiction: |
Pass |
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (references) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
(b) (citations to reliable sources) | The following do not appear to be reliable sources: Otherwise, all primary sources are used appropriately to cite direct statistics and other non-contentious information. |
Pass |
(c) (original research) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (major aspects) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
(b) (focused) | The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
Notes | Result |
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The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
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The reviewer has no notes here. | Pass |
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Pass | The reviewer has no notes here. |
I haven't finished my initial review yet, since it's harder than I expected to do it on my iPad. I'll complete my initial notes within the next day or two at most. — Darkwind ( talk) 04:53, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
What I did about your Mos comments is enough? About the MSN, well, it starts to difficult to me since I looked every place and I couldn't find other sources but I'll try. Any suggestion about where I can find I RS for it, DragonZero? Gabriel Yuji ( talk) 05:40, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Almost done - just a bit of work on the sourcing. — Darkwind ( talk) 07:39, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Any other issues, Darkwind? Gabriel Yuji ( talk) 02:27, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
For example, the second paragraph of the lead could be cut down as such:
The Shaman King manga was originally serialized in Shueisha's Weekly Shōnen Jump between 1998 and 2004. It was adapted into an animated television series produced by Xebec and co-produced by TV Tokyo, which aired on Japan's TV Tokyo network from 2001 to 2002. The manga has also been reprinted in a kanzenban edition called Shaman King Kanzen-Ban (or "Perfect Edition"). The series has spawned video games, a trading card game, and many types of Shaman King-related merchandise.
Just make sure that any specifics removed from the lead are given elsewhere in the article (e.g. the exact air dates of the anime should be in the subsection discussing the anime, not the lead, and the same with the exact length of the manga). — Darkwind ( talk) 07:23, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
The plot summary can be given some context by introducing it with a sentence containing real-world perspective. For example, you could do something like "The plot of Shaman King focuses on the interaction between Manta Oyamada and Yoh Asakura." Or, as the plot summary progresses through the timeline of the series, you could begin each paragraph of the plot summary with "In volumes 10 through 15, <stuff happens>." See the last paragraph of the "plot summaries" section of MOS:FICTION for details. — Darkwind ( talk) 07:23, 30 November 2013 (UTC)