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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 09:40, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Will return with a review within the next few days.-- Alexandra IDV 09:40, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
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For the first game in the series, see Shadow Hearts (video game).should be reworded
consisting of a trilogy of titles for the PlayStation 2 (PS2) and its predecessor Koudelka for the PlayStation.should say "and their predecessor" if we're saying Koudelka is the predecessor of the PS2 games and not of the entire franchise
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a time chosen as a turning point between an area of superstition- this should say "a period of...", right?
Shadow Hearts, which takes place during the years 1913 and 1914,- it is clear that they are years. I would rewrite this as "...which takes place in 1913–1914"
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horror RPG?
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I only had a few comments to leave on this one, and they seem pretty easy to address. I will put this on hold for the usual seven days - ping me when you have addressed them or if you have any questions.-- Alexandra IDV 06:08, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 09:40, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Will return with a review within the next few days.-- Alexandra IDV 09:40, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Infobox
Lead
For the first game in the series, see Shadow Hearts (video game).should be reworded
consisting of a trilogy of titles for the PlayStation 2 (PS2) and its predecessor Koudelka for the PlayStation.should say "and their predecessor" if we're saying Koudelka is the predecessor of the PS2 games and not of the entire franchise
Titles
Gameplay
Setting and characters
a time chosen as a turning point between an area of superstition- this should say "a period of...", right?
Shadow Hearts, which takes place during the years 1913 and 1914,- it is clear that they are years. I would rewrite this as "...which takes place in 1913–1914"
Production
horror RPG?
Reception
Legacy
References
Things not strictly part of GA
I only had a few comments to leave on this one, and they seem pretty easy to address. I will put this on hold for the usual seven days - ping me when you have addressed them or if you have any questions.-- Alexandra IDV 06:08, 31 August 2021 (UTC)