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She is the only one of Esarhaddon's daughters who is known by name and inscriptions listing the royal children suggest that she outranked several of her brothers in importance; outranking younger male children such as Ashur-mukin-paleya but ranking behind the crown princes Ashurbanipal and Shamash-shum-ukin. suggest She is the only one of Esarhaddon's daughters to be known by name and inscriptions listing the royal children suggest that she outranked several of her brothers, such as her younger brothers Ashur-mukin-paleya, but below the crown princes Ashurbanipal and Shamash-shum-ukin.
daughter and also reprimands her for not doing her homework. no suggestion here, just thought this was funny.
Esarhaddon, who reigned as king of Assyria 681–669 BC suggest Esarhaddon, who reigned as king of Assyria from 681–669 BC
Ashur-etel-shame-erseti-muballissu have an ongoing theory that civilizations with super long names are predestined to rapid collapses when everyone gets tired of pronouncing the names.
gives Serua-eterat a central role in the negotiations before the civil war started, c. 652 BC suggest gives Serua-eterat a central role in the negotiations before the civil war started around 652 BC
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.
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She is the only one of Esarhaddon's daughters who is known by name and inscriptions listing the royal children suggest that she outranked several of her brothers in importance; outranking younger male children such as Ashur-mukin-paleya but ranking behind the crown princes Ashurbanipal and Shamash-shum-ukin. suggest She is the only one of Esarhaddon's daughters to be known by name and inscriptions listing the royal children suggest that she outranked several of her brothers, such as her younger brothers Ashur-mukin-paleya, but below the crown princes Ashurbanipal and Shamash-shum-ukin.
daughter and also reprimands her for not doing her homework. no suggestion here, just thought this was funny.
Esarhaddon, who reigned as king of Assyria 681–669 BC suggest Esarhaddon, who reigned as king of Assyria from 681–669 BC
Ashur-etel-shame-erseti-muballissu have an ongoing theory that civilizations with super long names are predestined to rapid collapses when everyone gets tired of pronouncing the names.
gives Serua-eterat a central role in the negotiations before the civil war started, c. 652 BC suggest gives Serua-eterat a central role in the negotiations before the civil war started around 652 BC