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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 11:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
I'll review this one as well.-- Alexandra IDV 11:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
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(VR)after the first mention of virtual reality
The Last Hope was developed by Croteam VR,fine to mention that the division was established after VR experiments, but you don't need to repeat that they are the developers, since this is already mentioned in the first sentence
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Development and release
added rudimentary support for both VR headsets to The Talos Principle.Would suggest "to their game The Talos Principle" to make the connection stronger. Additionally, the timeline is unclear here - was Talos Principle still in development at this point, or was VR support added as a post-release update?
since good games, such as The Last Hope,strike "such as The Last Hope", we can't call a game objectively good in Wikipedia's voice. Also clarify that "good games would sell themselves" is Kotlar's opinion
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|website=
parameter, I think you are right. I changed all cases to |publisher=
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IceWelder [
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Looks pretty good! I'll put this on hold for seven days - ping me when you have addressed the issues I brought up or if you have any questions.-- Alexandra IDV 11:54, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
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Improved to Good Article status by IceWelder ( talk). Self-nominated at 09:50, 3 November 2020 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 11:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
I'll review this one as well.-- Alexandra IDV 11:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
Lead
(VR)after the first mention of virtual reality
The Last Hope was developed by Croteam VR,fine to mention that the division was established after VR experiments, but you don't need to repeat that they are the developers, since this is already mentioned in the first sentence
Gameplay
Development and release
added rudimentary support for both VR headsets to The Talos Principle.Would suggest "to their game The Talos Principle" to make the connection stronger. Additionally, the timeline is unclear here - was Talos Principle still in development at this point, or was VR support added as a post-release update?
since good games, such as The Last Hope,strike "such as The Last Hope", we can't call a game objectively good in Wikipedia's voice. Also clarify that "good games would sell themselves" is Kotlar's opinion
Reception
References
|website=
parameter, I think you are right. I changed all cases to |publisher=
. I used "HTC Vive" on the one YouTube source because it was uploaded on the channel for the product.
IceWelder [
✉]
15:12, 2 November 2020 (UTC)Images
Looks pretty good! I'll put this on hold for seven days - ping me when you have addressed the issues I brought up or if you have any questions.-- Alexandra IDV 11:54, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk)
07:25, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by IceWelder ( talk). Self-nominated at 09:50, 3 November 2020 (UTC).
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |