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Reviewer: Wizardman 19:48, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
A very nice article, most of the issues I found I tweaked. I just have one sentence of confusion:
- "However late on September 8 they declared that the disturbance had dissipated again before during the JMA also reported that the depression had dissipated." Again before during? Yeah, I'm confused as to what that part of the sentence means.
On hold then will pass, you know the drill. Wizardman 19:48, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed, thanks for the review :) Cyclonebiskit ( talk) 21:34, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good, article passed. Wizardman 01:13, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Wizardman 19:48, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
A very nice article, most of the issues I found I tweaked. I just have one sentence of confusion:
- "However late on September 8 they declared that the disturbance had dissipated again before during the JMA also reported that the depression had dissipated." Again before during? Yeah, I'm confused as to what that part of the sentence means.
On hold then will pass, you know the drill. Wizardman 19:48, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed, thanks for the review :) Cyclonebiskit ( talk) 21:34, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good, article passed. Wizardman 01:13, 12 November 2009 (UTC)