Sentimiento (album) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the
good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be
renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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"The album was composed by Ivy" ---> her last name, or in this case, Queen would need to replace "Ivy" per
WP:BIO
"alongside various writers, artists, and producers." ---> their names would need to be addressed here. Take a look at
Mariah Carey (album) and
Selena Live! for examples
"It featured a collaboration with Don Omar as well as other songs that did not include Ivy Queen on them." ----> needs to be explained further, what do you mean by "other songs"? Why was she not included in songs that are in her album?
"It marks the first time Ivy Queen cracked the Billboard Top 200," ----> Not a good entrance, furthermore we need the positions.
"entering the Top Latin Album chart at number 4" ---> number 4 needs to be written out as such "number four" per
WP:ORDINAL
"making it her highest peaking position yet by any of her albums." ---> As of 2012, Sentimiento remained her highest-ranking album on the Top Latin Albums chart. I believe that's what you are trying to say?
"Its also her fastest selling album, " ---> you mean Becoming her fastest-selling album, Sentimiento received a platinum certification from the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA), denoting shipments of 100,000 copies in the United States. also link
Recording Industry Association of America and
platinum.
There are too many instances with "the album" try to switch it up (e.g., the recording, Sentimineto, it, etc.)
"The album spawned three singles the lead, "Que Lloren" became a Top 10 hit on the Hot Latin Tracks chart; and the second being "En Que Fallamos"." ----> Sentimineto produced three single, leading single "Que Lloren", "En Que Fallamos", and the title track, the latter reached the top 10 on the US Hot Latin Tracks chart. The title track peaked at number 44 on the Dance/Club Play Songs chart. Also did "En Que Fallamos" shared a position? Also link
Dance/Club Play Songs
"It marks the second and last studio album released under Univision before switching to Machete Music in 2010 to release her seventh studio album." ----> The recording marked the last studio album by Queen to be released under Univision, before switching to Machete Music in 2010. pay no mind to what I've unlink, like all terms as you have them on the article
No need for bolded texts in the "background" section
There are some sentences such as this one "Sentimiento is the sixth studio album by Ivy Queen. It marks the second and last album under the label Univision." that resembles the lead which is a big no no ;)
The "composition" and "critical reception" sections lacks any
wikilinks, needs cleanup
Sentimiento (album) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the
good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be
renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Albums, an attempt at building a useful resource on recordings from a variety of genres. If you would like to participate, visit the
project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the
discussion.AlbumsWikipedia:WikiProject AlbumsTemplate:WikiProject AlbumsAlbum articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Latin music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
Latin music (music performed in Spanish, Portuguese and the languages of Ibero-America, see project scope for more details) on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Latin musicWikipedia:WikiProject Latin musicTemplate:WikiProject Latin musicLatin music articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Puerto Rico, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics related to
Puerto Rico on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Puerto RicoWikipedia:WikiProject Puerto RicoTemplate:WikiProject Puerto RicoPuerto Rico articles
"The album was composed by Ivy" ---> her last name, or in this case, Queen would need to replace "Ivy" per
WP:BIO
"alongside various writers, artists, and producers." ---> their names would need to be addressed here. Take a look at
Mariah Carey (album) and
Selena Live! for examples
"It featured a collaboration with Don Omar as well as other songs that did not include Ivy Queen on them." ----> needs to be explained further, what do you mean by "other songs"? Why was she not included in songs that are in her album?
"It marks the first time Ivy Queen cracked the Billboard Top 200," ----> Not a good entrance, furthermore we need the positions.
"entering the Top Latin Album chart at number 4" ---> number 4 needs to be written out as such "number four" per
WP:ORDINAL
"making it her highest peaking position yet by any of her albums." ---> As of 2012, Sentimiento remained her highest-ranking album on the Top Latin Albums chart. I believe that's what you are trying to say?
"Its also her fastest selling album, " ---> you mean Becoming her fastest-selling album, Sentimiento received a platinum certification from the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA), denoting shipments of 100,000 copies in the United States. also link
Recording Industry Association of America and
platinum.
There are too many instances with "the album" try to switch it up (e.g., the recording, Sentimineto, it, etc.)
"The album spawned three singles the lead, "Que Lloren" became a Top 10 hit on the Hot Latin Tracks chart; and the second being "En Que Fallamos"." ----> Sentimineto produced three single, leading single "Que Lloren", "En Que Fallamos", and the title track, the latter reached the top 10 on the US Hot Latin Tracks chart. The title track peaked at number 44 on the Dance/Club Play Songs chart. Also did "En Que Fallamos" shared a position? Also link
Dance/Club Play Songs
"It marks the second and last studio album released under Univision before switching to Machete Music in 2010 to release her seventh studio album." ----> The recording marked the last studio album by Queen to be released under Univision, before switching to Machete Music in 2010. pay no mind to what I've unlink, like all terms as you have them on the article
No need for bolded texts in the "background" section
There are some sentences such as this one "Sentimiento is the sixth studio album by Ivy Queen. It marks the second and last album under the label Univision." that resembles the lead which is a big no no ;)
The "composition" and "critical reception" sections lacks any
wikilinks, needs cleanup