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Reviewer: ArnabSaha ( talk · contribs) 13:56, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
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❯❯❯ S A H A 11:53, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
is within walking distance to the Compassvale Bus Interchange.- should probably be "within walking distance of"
developed under an ambitious programme by the Government- Either the Singapore government could be linked here, or "Government" should be lowercase.
The station begun to serve the West loop- "The station began..." or "The station had begun...". In this case, "began" is better.
In 2018, it was announced that the station will be further upgraded which includes improved barrier-free access to the station, new dual-speed escalators leading to the platforms, and an additional lift for the MRT, LRT and mezzanine levels of Sengkang station as well as expanding the current LRT train platform to create a more spacious area for commuters by 2022.- I'd split this into 2 sentences, after "the MRT, LRT and mezzanine levels of Sengkang station".
The station is located in Sengkang New Town[20], located along Sengkang Square.[1]- put punctuation before references, and I would remove both instances of "located".
The MRT/LRT station was the first such station on the MRT network to have all three modes of transport seamlessly connected.- "Seamlessly connected" sounds strange. I would suggest something like "The MRT/LRT station was the first intermodal station on the MRT network for all three modes of transport". epicgenius ( talk) 16:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Someone pinged me inregards to Commons being inline - Generally speaking I prefer inline when there's barely any external links - A box template is useful over inline when there's a lot of links as the reader may miss it with there being loads of links whereas that wouldn't be the case with 1 or 2 links, Personally I see no reason why this should be changed and I'm rather miffed as to why a Commons link is part of a GA criteria....– Davey2010 Talk 21:00, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: ArnabSaha ( talk · contribs) 13:56, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
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{{Commons category}}
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❯❯❯ S A H A 11:53, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
is within walking distance to the Compassvale Bus Interchange.- should probably be "within walking distance of"
developed under an ambitious programme by the Government- Either the Singapore government could be linked here, or "Government" should be lowercase.
The station begun to serve the West loop- "The station began..." or "The station had begun...". In this case, "began" is better.
In 2018, it was announced that the station will be further upgraded which includes improved barrier-free access to the station, new dual-speed escalators leading to the platforms, and an additional lift for the MRT, LRT and mezzanine levels of Sengkang station as well as expanding the current LRT train platform to create a more spacious area for commuters by 2022.- I'd split this into 2 sentences, after "the MRT, LRT and mezzanine levels of Sengkang station".
The station is located in Sengkang New Town[20], located along Sengkang Square.[1]- put punctuation before references, and I would remove both instances of "located".
The MRT/LRT station was the first such station on the MRT network to have all three modes of transport seamlessly connected.- "Seamlessly connected" sounds strange. I would suggest something like "The MRT/LRT station was the first intermodal station on the MRT network for all three modes of transport". epicgenius ( talk) 16:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Someone pinged me inregards to Commons being inline - Generally speaking I prefer inline when there's barely any external links - A box template is useful over inline when there's a lot of links as the reader may miss it with there being loads of links whereas that wouldn't be the case with 1 or 2 links, Personally I see no reason why this should be changed and I'm rather miffed as to why a Commons link is part of a GA criteria....– Davey2010 Talk 21:00, 16 October 2020 (UTC)