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Reviewer: MusikAnimal ( talk · contribs) 17:29, 19 December 2013 (UTC)
This article was nominated almost four months ago... about time to get it off the backlog if you ask me! At first glance it looks good. I'll be busy this following week, but expect my full review by the end of the month. — MusikAnimal talk 17:29, 19 December 2013 (UTC)
“Ex- A Day to Remember guitarist Tom Denney co-wrote with Fuentes a majority of the songs, as well as some of the music.”
“By January 11, 2010, the vocals and keyboard tracks had yet to be recorded and that the music for the songs were finished.”
"By January 11, 2010, the vocals and keyboard tracks had yet to be recorded but the album was otherwise complete."How does that sound?
“A studio update posted on February 17 mentioned that Fuentes was still working on the album, and a couple of days later he said there would be "8 days left of recording vocals".”
I'm afraid I have to stop reviewing at this point as there appears to consistent issues throughout the article, primarily with prose and grammar. Some specifics:
On the bright side, everything is very well sourced, verifiable and certainly broad in coverage. I'd say it's mainly #1 of
WP:GA? that is the issue.
MOS:ALBUM may also be of help in improving this article.
Fail due to
overuse of quotes and
grammar. —
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02:38, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MusikAnimal ( talk · contribs) 17:29, 19 December 2013 (UTC)
This article was nominated almost four months ago... about time to get it off the backlog if you ask me! At first glance it looks good. I'll be busy this following week, but expect my full review by the end of the month. — MusikAnimal talk 17:29, 19 December 2013 (UTC)
“Ex- A Day to Remember guitarist Tom Denney co-wrote with Fuentes a majority of the songs, as well as some of the music.”
“By January 11, 2010, the vocals and keyboard tracks had yet to be recorded and that the music for the songs were finished.”
"By January 11, 2010, the vocals and keyboard tracks had yet to be recorded but the album was otherwise complete."How does that sound?
“A studio update posted on February 17 mentioned that Fuentes was still working on the album, and a couple of days later he said there would be "8 days left of recording vocals".”
I'm afraid I have to stop reviewing at this point as there appears to consistent issues throughout the article, primarily with prose and grammar. Some specifics:
On the bright side, everything is very well sourced, verifiable and certainly broad in coverage. I'd say it's mainly #1 of
WP:GA? that is the issue.
MOS:ALBUM may also be of help in improving this article.
Fail due to
overuse of quotes and
grammar. —
MusikAnimal
talk
02:38, 24 December 2013 (UTC)