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... that the punishment of sinners in the second circle of hell(pictured) is an example of contrapasso? Print sources in article; refs 17 and 18
ALT1: ... that
Rodin's sculpture The Kiss(pictured) depicts two of the souls damned to the second circle of hell? Print source again; ref 20 in the article
Comment: If using ALT1, consider
File:Rodin - Le Baiser 06.jpg alongside it; I don't know how to add a second image to the nomination.
Rodin's The Kiss
Created by
Grapple X (
talk). Self-nominated at 22:12, 26 November 2021 (UTC).reply
Comment, not review - Added the second picture and adjusted hooks. Earwig's complains about identical text in
First circle of hell but you wrote that, so not a problem. If one of these alts are chosen, I think it should be in the image slot, the reader learns a lot more through these. The first image just needs a US-PD tag on commons.
Urve (
talk) 10:19, 27 November 2021 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the help with the images; have added a PD-US tag to the Blake image based on it being published pre-1926.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 15:57, 27 November 2021 (UTC)reply
Approve Main Hook and first image I see this is going to be a long-term project for you. I look forward to seeing all the other circles of hell. Anyways, article was moved to mainspace today, so is new enough. It is more than long enough and properly uses inline citations and I'll AGF on the offline sources. For the hooks...hmm...I think I'm leaning toward the main hook, just because I feel it's more likely to get people to click, which is one of the main points after all. The hook is interesting and cited inline. The QPQ has been done and image looks to be PD, so is good to be used. Everything seems good to go.
SilverserenC 20:02, 27 November 2021 (UTC)reply
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FormalDudetalk 07:49, 9 January 2022 (UTC)reply
Article is quite similar to
First circle of Hell and
Third circle of hell, which were also written by you. Let's cover some more detail; good class articles are supposed to be complete enough to satisfy a serious student or researcher. Some additional background and context could be added for the characters (for example Minos and Homer).
Change murdered lovers whose story was contemporary with, and well-known in, Dante's time. to murdered lovers whose story was contemporary with (and well-known) in Dante's time.
Thanks for taking a look at this. I've amended the links as you mention and reworded the sentence in the lead--as it's just a summary of the body I opted to trim it rather than introduce bracketed asides for the sake of clarity, let know me if that's alright. Changes can be seen
here. As to expanding the background--I will take another look for some more material discussing the depiction of Minos but what level of detail do you feel should be devoted to Homer? My inclination would be just to provide a brief gloss as to who he was and what he wrote without going into any real detail, as he's usually considered less influential on the Commedia than Virgil's Aeneids are, but if you feel like more is warranted I can go further.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 15:28, 14 January 2022 (UTC)reply
Some further discussion on the depiction of Minos added
here.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 16:15, 14 January 2022 (UTC)reply
That's great, thanks! This is a very well done article and I'm happy to list it as GA. ––
FormalDudetalk 16:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your review. If there's anything further you'd like to see addressed, let me know.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 00:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)reply
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... that the punishment of sinners in the second circle of hell(pictured) is an example of contrapasso? Print sources in article; refs 17 and 18
ALT1: ... that
Rodin's sculpture The Kiss(pictured) depicts two of the souls damned to the second circle of hell? Print source again; ref 20 in the article
Comment: If using ALT1, consider
File:Rodin - Le Baiser 06.jpg alongside it; I don't know how to add a second image to the nomination.
Rodin's The Kiss
Created by
Grapple X (
talk). Self-nominated at 22:12, 26 November 2021 (UTC).reply
Comment, not review - Added the second picture and adjusted hooks. Earwig's complains about identical text in
First circle of hell but you wrote that, so not a problem. If one of these alts are chosen, I think it should be in the image slot, the reader learns a lot more through these. The first image just needs a US-PD tag on commons.
Urve (
talk) 10:19, 27 November 2021 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the help with the images; have added a PD-US tag to the Blake image based on it being published pre-1926.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 15:57, 27 November 2021 (UTC)reply
Approve Main Hook and first image I see this is going to be a long-term project for you. I look forward to seeing all the other circles of hell. Anyways, article was moved to mainspace today, so is new enough. It is more than long enough and properly uses inline citations and I'll AGF on the offline sources. For the hooks...hmm...I think I'm leaning toward the main hook, just because I feel it's more likely to get people to click, which is one of the main points after all. The hook is interesting and cited inline. The QPQ has been done and image looks to be PD, so is good to be used. Everything seems good to go.
SilverserenC 20:02, 27 November 2021 (UTC)reply
There is a move discussion in progress on
Talk:Third circle of hell which affects this page. Please participate on that page and not in this talk page section. Thank you. —
RMCD bot 04:05, 17 December 2021 (UTC)reply
I will post updates here as I complete the review. Please allow up to seven days for the review to be completed. ––
FormalDudetalk 07:49, 9 January 2022 (UTC)reply
Article is quite similar to
First circle of Hell and
Third circle of hell, which were also written by you. Let's cover some more detail; good class articles are supposed to be complete enough to satisfy a serious student or researcher. Some additional background and context could be added for the characters (for example Minos and Homer).
Change murdered lovers whose story was contemporary with, and well-known in, Dante's time. to murdered lovers whose story was contemporary with (and well-known) in Dante's time.
Thanks for taking a look at this. I've amended the links as you mention and reworded the sentence in the lead--as it's just a summary of the body I opted to trim it rather than introduce bracketed asides for the sake of clarity, let know me if that's alright. Changes can be seen
here. As to expanding the background--I will take another look for some more material discussing the depiction of Minos but what level of detail do you feel should be devoted to Homer? My inclination would be just to provide a brief gloss as to who he was and what he wrote without going into any real detail, as he's usually considered less influential on the Commedia than Virgil's Aeneids are, but if you feel like more is warranted I can go further.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 15:28, 14 January 2022 (UTC)reply
Some further discussion on the depiction of Minos added
here.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 16:15, 14 January 2022 (UTC)reply
That's great, thanks! This is a very well done article and I'm happy to list it as GA. ––
FormalDudetalk 16:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your review. If there's anything further you'd like to see addressed, let me know.
ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ 00:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)reply