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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 06:37, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll do this review.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 06:37, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
The toolbox to the right suggests that this article needs lots of work:
I've defined UMTA, I've added current dollar conversions, and I've replaced "realized" in the history section with "recognized". I also merged the last two paragraphs in the background. I haven't done anything with ICs or dates yet, or anything about rewriting the lead. Lukeno94 (tell Luke off here) 08:22, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 06:37, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll do this review.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 06:37, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
The toolbox to the right suggests that this article needs lots of work:
I've defined UMTA, I've added current dollar conversions, and I've replaced "realized" in the history section with "recognized". I also merged the last two paragraphs in the background. I haven't done anything with ICs or dates yet, or anything about rewriting the lead. Lukeno94 (tell Luke off here) 08:22, 17 June 2013 (UTC)