Three-sentence lead is a little brief, try to make sure you summarise all the sections of the article.
Why is "Floorless Coaster" capitalised?
"Scream for the 2003 season.[6] Scream would be the park's sixteenth roller coaster.[7]" ->"Scream for the 2003 season,[6] making it the park's sixteenth roller coaster.[7]"
" hourly capacity of 1440 riders per hour" two things, one -> 1,440 for consistency with the rest of the article and two -> you don't need both hourly and per hour.
No point in abbreviated OTSR if you don't use it.
"station" is overlinked.
"[8][6][12]" numerical order please.
"Best Steel-Tracked Roller Coaster" -> " Best steel-tracked roller coaster"
Put an en-dash in 2011.
Check refs for en-dash, e.g. ref 21's title.
Consistent date format, e.g. compare ref 11 with ref 12.
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The Rambling Man: I have addressed all but your second issue. Floorless Coaster is capitalised because it is the name of a product/model of roller coaster offered by Bolliger & Mabillard (see
the article for details). When the term is used descriptively, I have not capitalised it. Themeparkgc Talk 03:41, 25 July 2013 (UTC)reply
Three-sentence lead is a little brief, try to make sure you summarise all the sections of the article.
Why is "Floorless Coaster" capitalised?
"Scream for the 2003 season.[6] Scream would be the park's sixteenth roller coaster.[7]" ->"Scream for the 2003 season,[6] making it the park's sixteenth roller coaster.[7]"
" hourly capacity of 1440 riders per hour" two things, one -> 1,440 for consistency with the rest of the article and two -> you don't need both hourly and per hour.
No point in abbreviated OTSR if you don't use it.
"station" is overlinked.
"[8][6][12]" numerical order please.
"Best Steel-Tracked Roller Coaster" -> " Best steel-tracked roller coaster"
Put an en-dash in 2011.
Check refs for en-dash, e.g. ref 21's title.
Consistent date format, e.g. compare ref 11 with ref 12.
@
The Rambling Man: I have addressed all but your second issue. Floorless Coaster is capitalised because it is the name of a product/model of roller coaster offered by Bolliger & Mabillard (see
the article for details). When the term is used descriptively, I have not capitalised it. Themeparkgc Talk 03:41, 25 July 2013 (UTC)reply