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Hey. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
Otherwise, it looks really good. The article will remain on hold for seven days for these few changes. Nikki♥ 311 01:21, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
OK, I think I've resolved the issues, I'm struggling a little bit with the tenses but I certainly got some of them to be the same. Let me know what you think. Cheers Nikki. :-) — Realist 2 03:28, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
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Hey. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
Otherwise, it looks really good. The article will remain on hold for seven days for these few changes. Nikki♥ 311 01:21, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
OK, I think I've resolved the issues, I'm struggling a little bit with the tenses but I certainly got some of them to be the same. Let me know what you think. Cheers Nikki. :-) — Realist 2 03:28, 22 November 2008 (UTC)