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Update 2015-05-31

I updated a part of this little stub. I tried to distinguish between the two series that were published. Part of the text I left as it was, for now, although I think it's really necessary to clean it up. As soon as I find some time........ Dick Bos ( talk) 20:02, 31 May 2015 (UTC) reply

Inappropriate use of "we"

The 'Owners and editors' section reads as if copied from an uncited source, or perhaps just oddly written with "we believe...", "we were given to understand...". If it is a quotation, it should be rewritten to make the source clear (i.e. who are 'we'?), otherwise it should be rewritten to remove 'we'. Gregmchapman ( talk) 03:45, 1 September 2016 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Update 2015-05-31

I updated a part of this little stub. I tried to distinguish between the two series that were published. Part of the text I left as it was, for now, although I think it's really necessary to clean it up. As soon as I find some time........ Dick Bos ( talk) 20:02, 31 May 2015 (UTC) reply

Inappropriate use of "we"

The 'Owners and editors' section reads as if copied from an uncited source, or perhaps just oddly written with "we believe...", "we were given to understand...". If it is a quotation, it should be rewritten to make the source clear (i.e. who are 'we'?), otherwise it should be rewritten to remove 'we'. Gregmchapman ( talk) 03:45, 1 September 2016 (UTC) reply


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