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23:22, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
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Hi! I'll take this article for review, and should have my full comments up by later tonight.
Dana boomer (
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23:22, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
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GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists):
- Design, "The Schwalbe class was the first unprotected cruisers" - "Schwalbe class was" is singular, but "unprotected cruisers" is plural.
- General characteristics, "transverse framing composed on steel, wood, and copper" - Should this be "composed of"?
- Not quite sure how I managed that typo, since the "n" and "f" keys aren't all that close :)
- Service history, "Both ships were sold for scrapping in August 1920 and were broken up for scrap in 1922 in Hamburg." - Scrapping...scrap, repetitive.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources):
c (
OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects):
b (
focused):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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