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Reviewer: EditorE ( talk · contribs) 18:51, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
Looks like a pretty good article so far, but here's some comments.
å’ŒDITOR E tails 18:51, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
I'm still seeing most of the problems in this article after you said you already fixed them, including the confusing "To composer the music" statement" and the way-too-repeated use of the word "described" in the style section. I'm only noticing your change of the sentence about the Christgau Jive reissue review and your addition Spin Alternative ratings in the table. Please check this article and my comments again, Thanks. å’ŒDITOR E tails 08:08, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: EditorE ( talk · contribs) 18:51, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
Looks like a pretty good article so far, but here's some comments.
å’ŒDITOR E tails 18:51, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
I'm still seeing most of the problems in this article after you said you already fixed them, including the confusing "To composer the music" statement" and the way-too-repeated use of the word "described" in the style section. I'm only noticing your change of the sentence about the Christgau Jive reissue review and your addition Spin Alternative ratings in the table. Please check this article and my comments again, Thanks. å’ŒDITOR E tails 08:08, 14 January 2016 (UTC)