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Reviewer: Sasata ( talk) 17:23, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
Hello, I've signed up to review this article. Hope to have an initial set of comments up in a day or two. Sasata ( talk) 17:23, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
*"This species was described by Linnaeus under the genus Ardea along with the larger herons." What year? Source?
*"Edward Blyth believed that there were actually two "Sarus Crane" species in India, Grus collaris and Grus antigone." When did he express this belief?
*"…predators of young birds include the dingo (Canis dingo) and fox (Vulpes vulvas)" is the
Red Fox the only fox predator, or do other foxes predate as well?
*"Among the Gonds, the tribes classified as "five-god worshippers" consider the Sarus Crane as sacred.[4] The meat of the Sarus was taboo." Can we change Gonds to Gondi people? Wondering about the verb tense change … do the tribes still consider the bird sacred? Is eating the meat still taboo (i.e. should it be "was" or "is")?
*"Although venerated and protected by Indians, these birds were hunted during the colonial period." Is there a link or timeframe for colonial period?
(a couple more)
*"The Sarus Crane is classified as Vulnerable (A2cde + 3cde) on the IUCN Red List." I'm not sure what the letter/number code means, and think not many readers would either. Are they necessary? Any chance of a citation to the IUCN for this statement?
*"Inbreeding effects in the Australian population may need to be studied." Why?
*range map needs a caption
*any chance of a more
RS for the Saras Light Transport Aircraft statement? If not, maybe at least a proper web cite template?
Ok, I think we're almost there. I'll put the article on hold. Sasata ( talk) 08:46, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sasata ( talk) 17:23, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
Hello, I've signed up to review this article. Hope to have an initial set of comments up in a day or two. Sasata ( talk) 17:23, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
*"This species was described by Linnaeus under the genus Ardea along with the larger herons." What year? Source?
*"Edward Blyth believed that there were actually two "Sarus Crane" species in India, Grus collaris and Grus antigone." When did he express this belief?
*"…predators of young birds include the dingo (Canis dingo) and fox (Vulpes vulvas)" is the
Red Fox the only fox predator, or do other foxes predate as well?
*"Among the Gonds, the tribes classified as "five-god worshippers" consider the Sarus Crane as sacred.[4] The meat of the Sarus was taboo." Can we change Gonds to Gondi people? Wondering about the verb tense change … do the tribes still consider the bird sacred? Is eating the meat still taboo (i.e. should it be "was" or "is")?
*"Although venerated and protected by Indians, these birds were hunted during the colonial period." Is there a link or timeframe for colonial period?
(a couple more)
*"The Sarus Crane is classified as Vulnerable (A2cde + 3cde) on the IUCN Red List." I'm not sure what the letter/number code means, and think not many readers would either. Are they necessary? Any chance of a citation to the IUCN for this statement?
*"Inbreeding effects in the Australian population may need to be studied." Why?
*range map needs a caption
*any chance of a more
RS for the Saras Light Transport Aircraft statement? If not, maybe at least a proper web cite template?
Ok, I think we're almost there. I'll put the article on hold. Sasata ( talk) 08:46, 13 January 2010 (UTC)