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A fact from Sarah McCreanor appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 February 2024 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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I like it, but that fact alone wasn't directly supported by the article (it just states that the series is called "Hydraulic Press Girl"). The hook I suggested focuses on her acting in commercials, which is mentioned. I've now added that fact to the article and support the alt hook.
ObserveOwl (
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my doings) 16:15, 21 December 2023 (UTC)reply
@
ObserverOwl: Technically the BoingBoing article on the page specifically calls her Hydraulic Press Girl.
BuySomeApples (
talk) 02:53, 23 January 2024 (UTC)reply
Yes, I just didn't add that fact to the article at the time of nomination. The Sydney Morning Herald says that "On YouTube, she is known as Hydraulic Press Girl", so I used this source to verify that.
ObserveOwl (
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Firstly, the "controversy" section arguably has BLP issues. Secondly I am inclined to agree with
Narutolovehinata5's implication that the "70 commercials" clause in ALT0 is superfluous, distracting and not very interesting.
Gatoclass (
talk) 01:03, 27 January 2024 (UTC)reply
Yea, I had lots of doubts about that section. I left it for the AfC reviewer to see if it was OK. I see that Tamzin removed the alleged identity of the accused, so was that enough to follow BLP? Again, I support ALT1.
ObserveOwl (
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I think the BLP issue has been resolved now, but my concern is with the hooks, that make her sound like a salesperson for hydraulic presses. Not sure what to do about that. I've noticed in the sources that she's played both an avocado and a jar of vegemite, and you'd think there'd be a decent hook in there someplace, I just can't seem to come up with one.
Gatoclass (
talk) 05:47, 3 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Or even ALT3: ... that Sarah McCreanor is known online as the "
Hydraulic Press Girl" for her dance videos? That would clarify she doesn't have that kind of job and make readers even more intrigued as to why.
ObserveOwl (
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
QPQ: None required.
Overall: ALTs 2 and 3 AGF verified. Her videos are very creative! (and sometimes a wee bit disturbing ...)
Gatoclass (
talk) 06:03, 16 February 2024 (UTC)reply
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A fact from Sarah McCreanor appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 February 2024 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
I like it, but that fact alone wasn't directly supported by the article (it just states that the series is called "Hydraulic Press Girl"). The hook I suggested focuses on her acting in commercials, which is mentioned. I've now added that fact to the article and support the alt hook.
ObserveOwl (
chit-chat •
my doings) 16:15, 21 December 2023 (UTC)reply
@
ObserverOwl: Technically the BoingBoing article on the page specifically calls her Hydraulic Press Girl.
BuySomeApples (
talk) 02:53, 23 January 2024 (UTC)reply
Yes, I just didn't add that fact to the article at the time of nomination. The Sydney Morning Herald says that "On YouTube, she is known as Hydraulic Press Girl", so I used this source to verify that.
ObserveOwl (
chit-chat •
my doings) 07:01, 23 January 2024 (UTC)reply
Firstly, the "controversy" section arguably has BLP issues. Secondly I am inclined to agree with
Narutolovehinata5's implication that the "70 commercials" clause in ALT0 is superfluous, distracting and not very interesting.
Gatoclass (
talk) 01:03, 27 January 2024 (UTC)reply
Yea, I had lots of doubts about that section. I left it for the AfC reviewer to see if it was OK. I see that Tamzin removed the alleged identity of the accused, so was that enough to follow BLP? Again, I support ALT1.
ObserveOwl (
chit-chat •
my doings) 08:08, 27 January 2024 (UTC)reply
I think the BLP issue has been resolved now, but my concern is with the hooks, that make her sound like a salesperson for hydraulic presses. Not sure what to do about that. I've noticed in the sources that she's played both an avocado and a jar of vegemite, and you'd think there'd be a decent hook in there someplace, I just can't seem to come up with one.
Gatoclass (
talk) 05:47, 3 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Or even ALT3: ... that Sarah McCreanor is known online as the "
Hydraulic Press Girl" for her dance videos? That would clarify she doesn't have that kind of job and make readers even more intrigued as to why.
ObserveOwl (
chit-chat •
my doings) 09:01, 4 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
QPQ: None required.
Overall: ALTs 2 and 3 AGF verified. Her videos are very creative! (and sometimes a wee bit disturbing ...)
Gatoclass (
talk) 06:03, 16 February 2024 (UTC)reply