The United States shouldn't be linked per
MOS:OVERLINK
Forgot to note here, fixed as well.
Background
"The Sammarinesi delegation consisted of a single alpine skier, Gian Matteo Giordani. Giordani was selected" - try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
Changed the wording around here.
Is there any source that states who was the flag bearer for the closing ceremony? If so, please add it in.
The only source I found was this release (
[1]), which unfortunately has an error and cuts off after Iceland's flag bearer. Because I couldn't find any alternative source (and because of the way the closing ceremony's march of nations works), I wasn't able to find anything listing him at the closing ceremony.
"He was the only athlete competing for San Marino at the 2002 games." - games need to be capitalized
Fixed.
Alpine skiing
"Giordani finished in 57th place overall, leaving him in last place among competitors that successfully completed the course and placed." - missing where Gordiani was placed overall and his combined times need to be written out in prose
Fixed.
References
Ref 4 should be italized since TIME is a printed publiciation
Thanks for the review, @
MWright96:! I've addressed all your comments except the closing ceremony note per my response above. Let me know if you have any other edits or concerns!
Nomader (
talk)
23:06, 22 June 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Nomader: It's understandable if there is no information about the flag bearers for the closing ceremony as that can be difficult to find. Regardless, this article can now become a good article.
MWright96(talk)06:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)reply
The United States shouldn't be linked per
MOS:OVERLINK
Forgot to note here, fixed as well.
Background
"The Sammarinesi delegation consisted of a single alpine skier, Gian Matteo Giordani. Giordani was selected" - try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
Changed the wording around here.
Is there any source that states who was the flag bearer for the closing ceremony? If so, please add it in.
The only source I found was this release (
[1]), which unfortunately has an error and cuts off after Iceland's flag bearer. Because I couldn't find any alternative source (and because of the way the closing ceremony's march of nations works), I wasn't able to find anything listing him at the closing ceremony.
"He was the only athlete competing for San Marino at the 2002 games." - games need to be capitalized
Fixed.
Alpine skiing
"Giordani finished in 57th place overall, leaving him in last place among competitors that successfully completed the course and placed." - missing where Gordiani was placed overall and his combined times need to be written out in prose
Fixed.
References
Ref 4 should be italized since TIME is a printed publiciation
Thanks for the review, @
MWright96:! I've addressed all your comments except the closing ceremony note per my response above. Let me know if you have any other edits or concerns!
Nomader (
talk)
23:06, 22 June 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Nomader: It's understandable if there is no information about the flag bearers for the closing ceremony as that can be difficult to find. Regardless, this article can now become a good article.
MWright96(talk)06:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)reply